Comments | mal_river: FIC: Eyes and Hands

srichard in mal_river

FIC: Eyes and Hands

Jan 15, 2006 00:06

TITLE: Eyes and Hands
RATING: PG-13
PAIRING: Mal/River
SUMMARY: A certain change in Mal's treatment of her causes River to neglect to care for herself.
WARNING/NOTES: Written for miss_strawberry because her collages rock my world. Serenity spoilers.

( Eyes and Hands )

title: e, author: srichard (deleted)

Comments 9

paperdollgirl January 15 2006, 09:40:36 UTC

*whips away some tears* I must have been doing good to deserve such a beautiful gift.
"You wouldn't see," she whispered softly. "Don't look anymore."
That line brook me heart. *sigh* I downloaded it to my palm so I can read it whenever I want to. Thank you so much for it. *huggles*

out_of_range04 January 15 2006, 15:52:44 UTC

Very well done. I love River saying "To begin." Very much made me smile. I'm not sure how I feel about Simon's response, although I'm eager as anyone to have River and Mal be all alone. ;) Well done though, keep up the good work!

jasonlizfan January 15 2006, 16:51:31 UTC

You did an amazing job. That was perfect.

gwenfrewi72 January 15 2006, 17:11:59 UTC

That was beautiful, amazing, awe inspiring, earth shattering and just out and out adorable.

I could go on and on, but don't have a thesaurus handy.

ninamazing January 16 2006, 02:59:21 UTC

Nahahaha! Awesome.

"And maybe you could let us have a conversation," Mal said curtly.

So hilarious - Mal is so ashamed, yet he's still willing to snap at Simon and defend himself. Fantastic.

A good scene, lots of give and take. :D Thanks.