5 Times River Ended up in Mal's Clothes

Dec 02, 2006 18:04

5 Times River Ended up in Mal's Clothes
Word Count: 821
Rating: PG-13 to R
Author’s Note: For fireworkfiasco. Special thanks to srichard for her amazing beta skills. You're still the best.
Summary: Well you read the title, you get the idea. This goes from innocent to naughty. What can I say, I’m a smut hound!

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author: gwenfrewi72, title: 5

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 00:26:55 UTC
Thanks. I figured a progression was definitely the way to go. I have to say writting those short pieces was a bit of a challenge for me but it was worth it.
The only one I wanted to write pages on was the last one for obvious reasons.
Glad you liked it love. I love your stuff and keep going back and rereading it because it seems to me that there isn't enough being written.

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 00:34:14 UTC
Obsidiana said her muse was Mal and I said mine was River and then the next thing we knew our muses had ran off together to have dirty,dirty sex together.
The still occassionally run off together, but we've found that if we get on the phone and whine about them being gone, they usually come back to inspire us more again.
The only good thing about that arrangement is they always come back with some shiny smuttiness (sp?) for us to write.

:D

I love, LOVE, LOVE you stuff and always have to go back an reread it when I've reached the end the newest fics I like to read.

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katiegsr December 3 2006, 00:57:38 UTC
Innocent-to-naughty I love the progression and a great way to wake up in the morning to a wonderful fic!

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 01:09:36 UTC
Thanks. The progression was just the only way to go on this I felt. And I'm glad it made your morning great!

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trialia December 3 2006, 01:32:58 UTC
Love it!

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 01:38:42 UTC
Thanks.

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 03:57:40 UTC
Hey, sometimes Gwennie needs to talk about herself in the 3rd person too!

Glad you liked it!

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aikakone December 3 2006, 03:47:22 UTC
I'll definitely go with the crowd. The progression works and is so like a real relationship. In fact, just a moment ago I was reading emails from my special someone, noticing how distant and polite we were to each other in the start. Now we are completely different because we changed and grew closer. So... it's cool. Fiction validates reality validates fiction.

I liked it. :) I guess that's the summary of my not so review-y review.

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 03:58:42 UTC
Thanks for the not so review-y review.

Yeah, life imitates art imitates reality is very true to life. You know what I mean.

Thanks again.

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