5 Times River Ended up in Mal's Clothes

Dec 02, 2006 18:04

5 Times River Ended up in Mal's Clothes
Word Count: 821
Rating: PG-13 to R
Author’s Note: For fireworkfiasco. Special thanks to srichard for her amazing beta skills. You're still the best.
Summary: Well you read the title, you get the idea. This goes from innocent to naughty. What can I say, I’m a smut hound!

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author: gwenfrewi72, title: 5

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yamiselene December 3 2006, 05:28:15 UTC
LOL...hehehe...poor, poor Mal...nicely written...I can see Mal struggling with himself and River slowly, but surely coercing Mal to just give up...hehehe...Mal and River are the best...look forward to whatever catches you attention and cause you to write more...*grin and wave

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 05:35:50 UTC
Thanks. I like the idea of poor Mal struggling to take the high road and failing miserably in the end.

Mal and River are the BEST.

I can do another 5 times if you like, just give me a topic. Trust me, they'll all end up dirty somehow in the end. It's just how I'm wired.

*giggles and waves back*

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yamiselene December 4 2006, 18:09:34 UTC
hehehe...hmm...how about...5 times Mal made River laugh...*grin...or 5 times River made Mal sweat...*smirk...5 times River and Mal were found in compromising positions...*shrug...whatever floats your boat...hehehe...*smiles and waves

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damiarvn December 3 2006, 06:06:02 UTC
5 times MAL ends up in RIVERS clothes...

(as previously dared) ... and maybe this time you'll do my request, you sitll haven't finished my b/day fic... and the 5 times inara ... whatever the hell it was (i think, lost her cool or something of that nature)

loved that. fave was bit 4, b ut you know this already ;)

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 06:34:05 UTC
Hey, cut me some slack here. You B-day fic is definitely gonna be wortht he wait. It's already *goes and checks* 2824 words and I've barely scratched the surface.

The 5 times Inara (who is not my favorite character) loses her cool is way to easy. Just mix with Mal and there it is!

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catvampcrazines December 3 2006, 08:20:09 UTC
Oh, loved all of these. I really enjoy how you used the theme.

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2006, 16:14:36 UTC
Thanks. The Mal ending up in River's clothing has been worked out and just needs to be written.

Glad you enjoyed it. Love your icon!

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modernmuse December 3 2006, 17:15:55 UTC
He wished he’d worn his coat, but he swore that every time he put it on it smelled like her and that led to images that guaranteed him a place in the Shepherd’s Special Hell.

Poor Mal trying to fight the inevitable. Great job as always.

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gwenfrewi72 December 4 2006, 04:32:49 UTC
Thanks luv. Yeah, Mal is fighting a losing battle, but that's what we love about him. He is always the underdog in his dealings and always comes out on top.

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obsidianagirl December 5 2006, 02:15:46 UTC
spicy! Like that it starts out slow. Really do. I also, like his reaction on laundry day. -snicker-

Been a while since I have seen ya, but you are still writing great with or without your ol' beta. Our muses are still playing hide and seek, but yours at least comes home on occasion.

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gwenfrewi72 December 5 2006, 04:21:25 UTC
All I have to say is I was just about ready to call you and complain that you hadn't read my fic yet. My feelings were about 5 minutes away from being hurt, but then I checked my e-mail and saw your post.

Your muse will come back, I promise!

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