Comments | makingamochrie: Fatal Collision--Part 2

makingamochrie

Fatal Collision--Part 2

Jun 04, 2007 01:42

Here's the second half to that scene.

TITLE: Fatal Collision Part 22
PAIRINGS: Ryan/Colin, Xena/Gabrielle
RATING: PG

CLOTHO

Something…

LACHESIS

Is…

ATROPOS

Wrong.

GREG

(cuttingly)

Can you speed this along, ladies?

(mimes looking at watch)

I’ve got a dinner date in thirty minutes.

CLOTHOS

All should be….

LACHESIS

As it once was….

ATROPOS

But it is not.

DREW

We… ( Read more... )

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ravenousboa June 4 2007, 05:50:38 UTC

Teehee. This is fun.

I love banter.

makingamochrie June 4 2007, 05:58:39 UTC

That's why I adore writing in script format. You just deal with banter because it's mostly dialogue, the actions left up to the actors' interpretations and the director. *G*

I'm glad you're having fun with it. Part 3 isn't in the comments, as I'm sure you've noted. It's up now.

ravenousboa June 4 2007, 06:05:06 UTC

I think I like writing in dialoge too. But I've only done it once. But I really enjoyed it. Though not in script format. I'm sleepy

makingamochrie June 4 2007, 06:40:33 UTC

Some writing partners and I, including one of the script writers for X:WP, wrote four season's worth of Virtual Xena after the show ended, so for four years, I was cranking out scripts. It's fun to do for a change since you only have to do basic scene setting and all dialogue. It's a fun change.

Get some sleep, Ravvie!

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Talk about some Wanky;) the_empressar June 4 2007, 15:58:20 UTC

This is very amusing...and it flows fast....moving right along...NO SPOILERS!! hahahahahaa...I'm in a silly mood today...so this suits me just fine:)!!!!!

Re: Talk about some Wanky;) makingamochrie June 4 2007, 15:59:45 UTC

It's a script for an action show. It's supposed to move fast. *G*

Re: Talk about some Wanky;) the_empressar June 4 2007, 16:16:35 UTC

On to part III.....looks like your story is the ONLY thing moving fast....SIGH!!!

razberrycreme June 4 2007, 16:20:47 UTC

ROFLMAO that is SO cute! I love them bantering around with each other!!!! ^________^

makingamochrie June 4 2007, 16:25:47 UTC

LOL! I'm glad you're enjoying it. As I was saying earlier, the script format leaves lots of space for good banter since you're essentially writing only dialogue pieces, with minimal stage direction to leave the interpretive choices up to the actors/actresses and the director.

I like writing it, I like reading it, and I like seeing it.

razberrycreme June 4 2007, 17:40:27 UTC

RAZ

(laughs and nods)

It does seem like a lot of fun!

(sticks out tongue)

makingamochrie June 4 2007, 17:42:03 UTC

You're such a shit, you know that? LOL!!

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