Fatal Collision--Part 2

[makingamochrie]

Here's the second half to that scene.

TITLE:  Fatal Collision Part 22
PAIRINGS:  Ryan/Colin, Xena/Gabrielle
RATING:  PG

CLOTHO

Something…

LACHESIS

Is…

ATROPOS

Wrong.

GREG

(cuttingly)

Can you speed this along, ladies?

(mimes looking at watch)

I’ve got a dinner date in thirty minutes.

CLOTHOS

All should be….

LACHESIS

As it once was….

ATROPOS

But it is not.

DREW

We…

Comments

[razberrycreme]

ROFLMAO that is SO cute! I love them bantering around with each other!!!! ^________^

[makingamochrie]

LOL! I'm glad you're enjoying it. As I was saying earlier, the script format leaves lots of space for good banter since you're essentially writing only dialogue pieces, with minimal stage direction to leave the interpretive choices up to the actors/actresses and the director.

I like writing it, I like reading it, and I like seeing it.

[razberrycreme]

RAZ

(laughs and nods)

It does seem like a lot of fun!

(sticks out tongue)

[makingamochrie]

You're such a shit, you know that? LOL!!

[razberrycreme]

RAZ

(shocked expression)

Excuse me?!

(snaps three times in air, ghetto chicken neck motion)

OH NO YOU DI'IN'T!

[makingamochrie]

(in the style of British pantomime)

OH YES YOU DID!

[razberrycreme]

RAZ

(a la Colin)

I'M A MIME!!!