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SENTENCE FRAGMENTS! JUST PHRASES! escherichiacola March 17 2011, 02:36:24 UTC
remembering how Gokudera’s father had been killed by a guy with a gun.

SUDDEN PLOT POINT

Several kids nodded to themselves, remembering how Gokudera’s mother had been killed by a popular kid.

I CAN'T

“There’s more important things in life than being popular,” Yamamoto asserted.

All of a sudden, you could hear a pin drop in the hall.

I DON'T LIKE PLAYING CARD GAMES

“Whatever,” Reborn said.

it is a tale, full of sound and fury

(also I am in tears)

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Re: SENTENCE FRAGMENTS! JUST PHRASES! makeste March 17 2011, 03:00:45 UTC
SUDDEN PLOT POINT

THE BEST KIND OF PLOT POINT AM I RIGHT.

Lol, I'm glad you liked it. ♥ This was maaaybe a bit too much fun to write. XD

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makeste March 17 2011, 03:02:48 UTC
If you've seen even one Degrassi commercial you pretty much know everything there is to know about Degrassi, so yeah. XD Heh, and I was hoping the bit of 8059 in there would be satirical enough that it wouldn't bother anyone even if it was unannounced.

Thank youuu, glad you liked it! ♥

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ojuzu March 17 2011, 02:54:25 UTC
Several kids nodded to themselves, remembering how Gokudera’s mother had been killed by a popular kid.

I am kind of crying right now.

Then they started making out.

where Sasagawa Ryohei was about to discover that his sweet and innocent little sister had been secretly involved in a scandalous relationship with her biology professor, Mr. Shamal.

With LAUGHTER.

Hibari Kyoya and his drinking problem

And okay I may as well just quote the ENTIRE FIC back at you, since it is all AMAZING. ♥ ♥ ♥

“…In fact, yes, our school is literally run by a pack of bullies.”

*giggles* I like how this is both a) true and b) an absolutely Yamamoto thing to say.

This fic is AMAZING, and I shall treasure it for ever. *goes back to muffling laughter*

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makeste March 17 2011, 03:06:21 UTC
With LAUGHTER.

THESE ARE TRAGEDIES, YOU KNOW. THESE KIDS ARE MESSED UP!

I like how this is both a) true and b) an absolutely Yamamoto thing to say.

Heh, that was my favorite line. I'd actually just written Tsuyoshi's "it's not like the whole place is run by bullies" part and I was like, "waaaaaaaaait" and then I exdeed. XD

♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you!

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storm_obsession March 17 2011, 13:56:09 UTC
.....WHAT THE HECK DID I JUST READ?! O_O
It was......like, purposely bad. In a way that was funny. Okay I'm so confused I'll just click "post comment", click the back button, and ...uh, get on with my life.
...I suppose you were just very bored.

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makeste March 18 2011, 01:21:34 UTC
It was......like, purposely bad. In a way that was funny.

THAT WAS EXACTLY THE INTENT, YOU HAVE INTERPRETED THE FIC CORRECTLY. |D

...I suppose you were just very bored.

I was indeed! XD

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closeme March 17 2011, 21:49:52 UTC
this was cool. i love how everything was just wrong.

“Okay, sure,” said Reborn, reaching over to the literal pile of guns he keeps right next to his hammock and tossing one at Tsuna in the most careless way humanly possible. “I see no way a plan like that can possibly backfire or go wrong at all.”

this was my favourate. y'know, with my fasination of reborn and guns. oh beautiful guns. FUCK YES.

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makeste March 18 2011, 01:23:00 UTC
i love how everything was just wrong.

Lol, yeah, I'll admit I had way too much fun going over the top here.

REBORN/GUNS OTP. *BROFIST!*

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reidluver March 18 2011, 15:54:11 UTC
Reborn/Guns....I'm so shipping that now! XD Along with W80 and Hibari/Hibird

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