Fanfic: As Time Goes By 23

[majincammy]

Title: As Time Goes By 23
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  Callie and Arizona A/U story.  Four kids, two department heads and Arizona’s past coming back to haunt her.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I do not intend to profit in any way, shape or form by posting this story. It's for fun, nothing more, and nothing less. Please don't sue me.

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Comments

[majincammy]

You're always my number one supporter and I cannot tell you enough how much I appreciate it. :)

Thank you! I really wanted the conversation to seem real and a little awkward. I love how Callie goes from the last chapter, where she screamed at Monica to get lost, to the end of this chapter, where she hopes her wife can find it within herself to forgive her. Hopefully, the next chapter won't take as long to get out! Thank you again. <3

[palex_4_ever]

I was pleasantly surprised that Arizona was so set against forgiving Monica. Great update

[majincammy]

So much happened in the past, I really couldn't see Arizona just forgiving her. JJ and I talked about it for a while and we both decided that Arizona needed to see Monica to really get out how hurt and angry she was. She never had the chance before. That was our reasoning, anyway. Thank you very much for your comment and I'm glad you were pleasantly surprised. :D

[orangeroughy]

Excellent chapter! This whole situation is so tough for everyone involved. Thank you for posting!

[majincammy]

Thank you! And yes, it's a very difficult situation for them all. But hopefully more things will be resolved next chapter. :)

You're very welcome! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you as always for commenting!

[pens_co927]

My computer keeps eating my comments :(
The emotions coming through the conversations were very palpable, very real, very intense. Awesome job! Any chance on an Altered States update?
Writer's block, huh? What a bitch it is to power through. Good luck.

[majincammy]

Why is your computer so hungry?!

Thank you. We really wanted to make this chapter seem realistic and we wanted the conversation to really flow.

Argh, you would ask that! I've been so focused on this, I haven't even started the next chapter of Altered States, but I will continue to write it, I just need inspiration to smack me upside the head or kick me in the ass or at least tell the writer's block to leave me the hell alone. :x

Thanks again! I really appreciate that you take the time to comment, really means a lot to me. <3

[ladyv85]

Beautifully done! It was so sad and intense...I hurt for Arizona but I know she will forgive Monica.

[majincammy]

We really ramped up the intensity for that conversation, it needed to be that way.

Thank you so much. There's a lot of emotion going on now, hopefully, next chapter will resolve some of it. I really like writing fluff more than this angsty stuff. :x