The Face of His Enemy - Chapter 3

[mahaliem]

Look! Look! See my story. It has a plot. The plot is little, but it will grow. See it grow. Look! Look! Look!

Title: The Face of His Enemy
Author: mahaliem
Rating: R
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Summary: On the train to Hogwarts, Draco is hit with a curse that results in him reassessing who he is and who his true enemies are.
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Comments

[ex_ella_bane358]

I really love the way Draco is feeling a bit guilty now and then. Neville's job as minion is so fun to read :) I'm also enjoying your plot; it's nice and tight. Great job!

[mahaliem]

Thank you.

[dianehc]

Wow. What a place to leave it at. I don't know whether that's cruelty or perfection. ps. I just love the way you're writing Neville. I'd write a longer adoration-filled response, but there's more of this to read. Till next post. Lovely job.

[mahaliem]

The more I write Neville, the more I like him. Which is interesting because, although I felt sorry for him, he was never one of my favorite characters.

[llaras]

oooooo.

very exciting. loving this.

[elisabet_moisio]

I'm reading this fic because of painless_j recommended this. And OMG! I'm so enjoying of this fic. Your Draco is perfect. And Neville as his minion is also perfect! This all is very priceless. No words really. :D

Anyway, thanks for this fic already, I'm still in the middle of this chapter but I already wanted to say big thanks. So thanks! :)

p.s. there are plenty of stuff which I find totally hilarious, but for some reason this line here made me laugh aloud. :D

-> "Pansy appeared confused. "Flattered as I am at that description, Weasley, I really don't think of you as my bitter enemy. To tell the truth, I often forget you even exist.""

the face of his enemy

[tsuj]

I am having such a good time reading this! The end here was incredible - and,dare I say? - BRILLIANT