Lessons -Fic-

Aug 31, 2009 19:11

Title: Lessons
Characters: Ian/Nikki
Rating: Hard R
Word Count: 668
Summary: Ian knows her body better than she does.
Disclaimer: I own neither; I just like to play in the Numb3rs sandbox.
Feedback: Is always and greatly appreciated.
Author's Notes: This was written for the numb3rs_het challenge with the prompts Student, Los Angeles, and Handcuffs. Unbetaed ( Read more... )

nikki betancourt, fic, numb3rs, ian edgerton

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julietm August 31 2009, 23:47:36 UTC
Wow...hawt AND amazing! I loved every word of it!!

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magisterequitum September 1 2009, 17:10:39 UTC
Thanks so much!

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mustangcandi September 1 2009, 03:20:33 UTC
GUH! Have I mentioned lately that I hate her just a little bit? haha.

Who am I kidding? I love Nikki and the only thing I love more is Ian/Nikki.

This was beautifully written, very sensual which might seem strange given the handcuff kink but not so much... you've written this just that well.

I like this This part of sex is foreign to her, never having someone to completely trust enough to relinquish the dominance instilled in her character until now. I think that says a lot about her and Ian. Love it. :)

*really needs more Ian/Nikki icons*

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magisterequitum September 1 2009, 17:10:17 UTC
This was beautifully written, very sensual which might seem strange given the handcuff kink but not so much... you've written this just that well.

Thank you. I really struggled with this and I'm certain that it's not the best that I could have done, but I was on limited time.

I like this This part of sex is foreign to her, never having someone to completely trust enough to relinquish the dominance instilled in her character until now. I think that says a lot about her and Ian. Love it. :)

I was really happy with this line. I wanted to have it be about basically porn, but I wanted to add stuff to it that would be meaningful.

Thanks so much!

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magisterequitum September 1 2009, 17:10:27 UTC
Thank you!

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elysium1996 September 7 2009, 03:35:37 UTC
nice!

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