Say What You Mean, Chapter 2: Parked Car

[maggie_danger]

Title: Say What You Mean, Do What You Say, Chapter 2

Genre: Drama, Kyouya x Tamaki

Rating: M

Warnings: Dirty, mean, full of horrible messages, and bad language

Notes: Thank you very, very much for all your support and comments. Good feedback inspires me to write faster and harder. (Pun intended, I’m afraid.) Also posted on ouranhost_slash here and

Comments

[t3h_toby_chan]

This story is really fantastically characterized, and has a tangibly tense atmosphere to it. A lot to saw about compromise, mistakes, growing up, and the bargaining that both of these characters do to in order to live their lives as they do.

Looking forward to more. It's been impressive thus far.

[york_pattie]

I love this story so much! It's not one of those stories where they are both like, "I know how you have felt about me for a long time >B) Let's do it." kind of things. I really like this! I hope you update soon!

[iheartmacca]

Brilliant characterization and...everything, really! Just an amazing fanfiction, and I can't wait for the next bit!

[sexineko]

hello ^^

I think you did a really good job on this story. wonderful characterization. The whole tense atmosphere mixing in with their lust and everything else is just so realistic.

In any case, i hope you don't mind me adding you as a friend.

I hope you write more soon~ ♥

[kay_cricketed]

*small voice* I check this every day to see if you've updated. I am slightly lame. BUT I BLAME THE AWESOME OF THIS FIC ENTIRELY ON THAT. XD

[maggie_danger]

Oh, why would I tell someone as flattering as you to stop? Ever? ^_^

Glad you're having fun. Chapter 3 has been 60% done for a month, but for some reason I had real trouble writing one of the dirty scenes and needed to get away from it. For too long. I'll probably sit my ass down this weekend and finish it so I can finally post, because seriously.

I've been a professional writer for ten years, so I'm relieved I can write a dirty fanfic and have someone say "a skill level of the actual process of writing is evident." *lol* Your feedback is very insightful and helpful, by the way. Thank you.

[kay_cricketed]

You shouldn't! Exactly so! That way, I can continue to stalk your journal with absolutely no qualms whatsoever. Yes. Thank you. >.>

Ahh, I know that feeling. Needing to get away from a piece for a bit, that is. No worries about the timeframe of when you get it done! Seriously, it's worth the wait. I just like to let people know when I'm an avid fan, to encourage the process. <3

Also, I am ridiculously relieved now that I won't be the only professional out there who still feels the need to write fanfic. XD XD (*raises hand* I'm an editor/writer! But only for two years now. Though I highly suspect I'll still be writing fanfic in another eight.)

But there is definitely a high skill level evident, and now I'm pleased to know the reason why. It is seriously one of the best stories I've had the pleasure to read for a long time on the Internet. (I feel like they're getting harder and harder to find... =_=)

If I can ask, what kind of professional writing do you do? <3

[maggie_danger]

Mostly in the manga industry, actually. (Writing/editing/adapting comics and novels.) You?