Say What You Mean, Chapter 2: Parked Car

[maggie_danger]

Title: Say What You Mean, Do What You Say, Chapter 2

Genre: Drama, Kyouya x Tamaki

Rating: M

Warnings: Dirty, mean, full of horrible messages, and bad language

Notes: Thank you very, very much for all your support and comments. Good feedback inspires me to write faster and harder. (Pun intended, I’m afraid.) Also posted on ouranhost_slash here and

Comments

[choseninstinct]

You are amazing...and I think I love you. 1st off your a biochemist, thats amazing, I just finished my last semseter of Organic Chem. more power too you. The second thing that makes you amazing is this story. I have to agree if it says M it should be M. But Omigod poor Kyouya, he turned his own best friend. I love tamaki, he is just dumb enough to always get what he want's from stubbornness. I love the ending part best...and i didn't think it could get anybetter. Kyouya saing "We're getting a room" is the best!!! I can’t believe that that cops found them…how embarrassing. If Tamaki wasn’t so contrite I am sure the cop would have not been so lenient. Either way he gave them a good idea.

[starlollie]

This is so fantasticly perfect.

[mightymaeve]

OH! I join the chorus of incredible characterization..these boys fly from the page and into a real concrete sort of form in my brain. ONe of your commentors also said, 'a tangibly tense atmosphere'. I can sense that too!