fic: nineteen [nine/rose]

May 07, 2010 03:45

nineteen. nine/rose, pg. 412 words. I felt you in my legs before I even met you. for mylittlepwny's prompt at takethewords' Billie Piper ficathon.

i was nineteen. )

doctor who, doctor/rose, fic

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lillibetm3 May 7 2010, 08:50:24 UTC
'...she takes a deep breath, letting him - and this feeling- in.'

Oh, and I'm so glad that she did. :)

Lovely!

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madeelly May 11 2010, 04:58:50 UTC
Thank you so much!

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anonymouscatt May 7 2010, 16:52:29 UTC
(Thank God.)

I love that last line because it's like a sigh of relief. Tension has been building throughout the fic and we're just waiting for it to become too much for Rose to handle, when suddenly none of that is an issue anymore. Nice work!

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madeelly May 11 2010, 04:59:25 UTC
Thank you very much! I was wondering whether or not the last line would work, but it felt right and I'm glad that people like it. ♥

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quean_of_swords May 7 2010, 17:27:46 UTC
This captures Pre-Doctor Rose really well, I think. ♥♥

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madeelly May 11 2010, 05:00:07 UTC
Thank you! I really love fic about pre-Doctor/Rose and Rose's life before, and I'm glad other people like it too!

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geordie_chick May 7 2010, 19:35:35 UTC
Lovely, really nice introspective piece, I love it.

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madeelly May 11 2010, 05:00:24 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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beingfacetious May 7 2010, 21:08:24 UTC
Oh, this was so lovely to read. I really like the idea of Rose waiting for the Doctor before that was even really possible.

He yells, "Run!" at her and she's pretty sure this is it. This is him.
Love this!

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madeelly May 11 2010, 05:01:37 UTC
Thank you! I've always felt that Rose could feel what was coming before she even knew. I'm glad I could express that in fic.

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