Comments | madebyme_x: Ficlet - What Could Have Been (14.13 AU Kale!Sam)

madebyme_x

Ficlet - What Could Have Been (14.13 AU Kale!Sam)

Mar 05, 2019 11:24

Title: What Could Have Been
Summary: 14.13 Ficlet. AU (Kale!Sam) Sam has plenty of secrets.
Rating: PG13
Genre/Spoilers: Gen. Season 14 spoilers.
Warnings: Unbeta'd. One sentence fic.
Word Count: 300+
Disclaimer: I don't own Supernatural that privilege belongs to CW, Kripke and Co, I'm simply borrowing them for a while. I'm not making a profit, ( Read more... )

evil!sam, au, single sentance ficlet, season 14, sam

Comments 16

ellerkay March 5 2019, 14:22:29 UTC

!!!!!!!! I love this!! I can really feel Sam's pain and fear, and the turn to rage is just GLORIOUS. I did not at all guess that the vial would have demon blood eeeeeeee. And his eyes flashing yellow!! God, poor kale!Sam. This hurts so good. <3

madebyme_x March 5 2019, 15:10:22 UTC

Thank you! I really went all out with this ficlet and one sentence format, and I really enjoyed it! I liked the idea of what if Dean didn't show up in Stanford, and after that, it sort took on a life of its own and spiraled into yellow-eyed Sam. Thank you for stopping by :)

jj1564 March 5 2019, 15:47:36 UTC

I love this, being one sentence makes it really feel like it's Sam's thoughts. And this made me giggle, then feel sad - "in his head someone says pretentious asshole, but Sam doesn't speak about him,"

Thank goodness kale!Sam never happened!

madebyme_x March 5 2019, 16:23:15 UTC

It's a great format to play with; I've never used it before but I'll certainly play with it again some time. I wanted a hint of Dean's voice there, so I'm really glad that you picked up on that.

This version of Sam is really quite intriguing, and I just let myself go with it and this is what happened!!! Thank you for stopping by :)

caranfindel March 5 2019, 18:49:23 UTC

WELL DONE, GRASSHOPPER! That's just chilling!

madebyme_x March 6 2019, 09:59:39 UTC

Hehe, thank you!!! I really enjoyed this format, it's all kinds of fun!

borgmama1of5 March 5 2019, 21:01:30 UTC

Yikes!

madebyme_x March 6 2019, 10:00:20 UTC

I know, I don't really know how it happened but it did!!!

roxymissrose March 5 2019, 21:41:18 UTC

OH. MY. GOD.

This is freaking BRILLIANT. Holy smokes, the demon blood was like a kick in the guts--it came out of nowhere! I was prepared to feel sorry for this poor, unloved shlub trying to be above everything and struggling to lock out the sadness, but he took the sadness and made a weapon out of it! See!!! This is what happens to a Winchester without his brother!

I loooooooooved this!!

madebyme_x March 6 2019, 10:01:42 UTC

Yes exactly! Take away the brother and things go south very quickly!!! I must admit that this was all kinds of fun to write. I'm really happy that you enjoyed it and the little twist!!!