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mad_gaters

With a Whimper

Mar 13, 2006 07:11

Title: With a Whimper
Author: laytoncolt
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG
Summary: You can't stop loving someone just because they rip your heart out, because torn or not, they've still got it in their hands.
Sequel: Sequel to Infidelity
( With a Whimper )

sga, slash, fanfic

Comments 22

jessiecross April 4 2010, 13:22:53 UTC

I was always reminded by my friends that if you really love someone you would forgive him/her if they cheated. God NO! Never. If someone cheats, that person does not deserve to be with you. It might be painful, betrayal never is easy, but ultimately there is no excuse for it...
I loved how you written this sequel. And i do feel bad for Rodney and for John, but in this fic i would not like to see them reunited, maybe "friends" again...
Good work

witchy_kat April 5 2010, 23:53:14 UTC

This is a great sequel. I love that it isn't resolved with the usual smirk and a kiss from John that has Rodney rolling over. Of course, since (like Rodney) I walked in on my ex (not at the time) and his girlfriend, I could be slightly biased with wanting John to pay for what he did. *g*

Great Story anonymous April 6 2010, 00:06:51 UTC

Oh, this is G O O D!

theeverdream July 24 2010, 08:29:45 UTC

Amazing ending.

neverwill_4871 August 20 2010, 22:14:39 UTC

Will we get Ronon 's POV on all this too? Did he know about Rodney & John? Was John aware that Rodney assumed they were exclusive, or did he think they were just casual? Was he aware of his own real feelings for Rodney before he ruined everything?

I liked the original story, and this sequel adds some nice depth to everything. I'd love to know if they can salvage their friendship if nothing else. It would be sad if years later Rodney is still alone because he won't let anyone that close to him again and John is alone because he's still pining (maybe from an outsider, or Ronon's POV.)