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;_; Thank you.machitobayeSeptember 2 2009, 04:28:17 UTC
Okay! ;_; My first crit, and it's such good crit. <3
1) Yes, the age thing was a mistake on my part. Admittedly, the error makes no difference in terms of the information, because he doesn't exactly grow much between 14 and 15, but I'll go fix that anyway.
2) You're absolutely right, and that's one thing I've always had trouble communicating... and something I really do need help with. To be honest, 'liar' Machi is the Machi from the game for the most part, but tempered a bit by experience in jail and the difficulties that come from learning who Lamiroir (and Trucy and Apollo) really are. He is, however, still... well, emotional, and while I have admittedly been limited in situations that would let me try to exercise his emotional responses in a positive light, I'm slowly trying to tackle this one at Dollsy--albeit really poorly. (It started with Anna, actually, whose situation I flailed through a lot, but he rescued Yukimi at Dollsy because Yukimi had helped him and tried to work with him previously.... this was tempered by a lot
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1) Yes, the age thing was a mistake on my part. Admittedly, the error makes no difference in terms of the information, because he doesn't exactly grow much between 14 and 15, but I'll go fix that anyway.
2) You're absolutely right, and that's one thing I've always had trouble communicating... and something I really do need help with. To be honest, 'liar' Machi is the Machi from the game for the most part, but tempered a bit by experience in jail and the difficulties that come from learning who Lamiroir (and Trucy and Apollo) really are. He is, however, still... well, emotional, and while I have admittedly been limited in situations that would let me try to exercise his emotional responses in a positive light, I'm slowly trying to tackle this one at Dollsy--albeit really poorly. (It started with Anna, actually, whose situation I flailed through a lot, but he rescued Yukimi at Dollsy because Yukimi had helped him and tried to work with him previously.... this was tempered by a lot ( ... )
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