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Fic: I Am What I Am (50/67)
Jul 08, 2007 07:19
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Chapter 26: Reflections, Transitions, and Cowboys
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fanfic: i am what i am
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draconin
July 9 2007, 12:19:45 UTC
Have I mentioned how much I'm enjoying re-reading this? :-)
BTW I don't think this qualifies as a typo but
"and had once or twice been so afraid by the"
might read better as
"and had once or twice been made so afraid by the".
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m_mcgregor
July 9 2007, 14:45:15 UTC
Glad to hear it, and yeah I agree, reads better that way, not quite as clunky. Thanks for the tip.
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BTW I don't think this qualifies as a typo but
"and had once or twice been so afraid by the"
might read better as
"and had once or twice been made so afraid by the".
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