Comments | m_l_frost: Owned Part Nine

m_l_frost

Owned Part Nine

May 19, 2007 00:17

Once Brendon’s breathing had slowed and his whimpers had ceased, Ryan had simply taken the boy’s hands, now untied, and led him out of the room to a back door and into the moonlit street. Ryan had hailed a cab and opened the door to let Brendon inside. Ryan had only spoken to direct the driver to a hotel a few blocks away and Brendon had shuffled ( Read more... )

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jwalkontherocks May 19 2007, 01:25:34 UTC

I would really love to leave some comment right now that could convey to you how incredible this is, but I can't. I literally can't because all my head can do is replay your story over and over again because holy fuck it's the most addictive drug I've ever taken.
more soon? It's like crack on viagra, this story.

m_l_frost May 19 2007, 11:24:53 UTC

Now now now, addictions are bad mmmkay. I prescribe you a week without reading any updates. Only kidding. x

fabledfaith May 19 2007, 01:38:19 UTC

-kill'd-

I've got to say, D/S stories have always freaked me out to some extent.. But for some reason, maybe out of curiousity or something, IO've been shyly reading this.. and.. OMGTHATLASTPARTMADEMETINGLEANDSMILE.

Sorry.

Yes, but, the exchange of 'I love you's' made me very, very happy. ^^ Adorable. (: And sexy. 8D

m_l_frost May 19 2007, 11:30:59 UTC

Gaaaaaah! It's Fabledfaith, of everystoryIhaveeverloved fame! Glad you like the story and hope it is not freaking you out because you are a fricking genius! Okay, enough with the mutual appreciation society.

Thank you so much for commenting on my story, between your comment and pluginxbaby's I feel properly chuffed.

Woo hoo!

xxx

fabledfaith May 19 2007, 13:40:46 UTC

Omg, that ALWAYS gets to me. xD; I'm still not used to the way people know who I am and are all, 'OMG ITS YOU'. Hehe, but thank you so much! ^^

Phfftttt, you deserve it. -rereads again- ♥

\o/

<3

i_drink_gerbils May 19 2007, 01:46:58 UTC

I love this story so much. It's just the perfect mix of warm and fucking hot. You are an excellent writer.

m_l_frost May 19 2007, 11:32:53 UTC

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! Hope it's making you horny ;)

crab_apple_kid May 19 2007, 02:52:20 UTC

ah this is so incredible, i love the combination of sexy and sweet
♥

m_l_frost May 19 2007, 11:33:51 UTC

Got to have a little sweetness with your sexy!

Kisses for you xxx

darkemptyheart May 19 2007, 03:41:06 UTC

I'm going to be honest with you: when I saw the first chapter for your story posted, I wouldn't read it because your author notes said this was your first slash story. Then out of curiousity because of the bdsm hints I picked up from your summary, I decided to read it....and let me say, I'm sorry I hadn't read it sooner ( ... )

m_l_frost May 19 2007, 11:58:21 UTC

Wow, thanks for such an intelligent and complimentary comment! It's great to get detailed constructive feedback, especially when it's so positive ( ... )

sullenriot19 May 19 2007, 15:08:36 UTC

I think it's really great, first of all, that there are apparently an abundance of very intelligent people reading this particular story. Honestly, I don't think that occurs on here as often as it should ( ... )

m_l_frost May 19 2007, 15:41:22 UTC

Hey thanks for that, I totally agree and shall definately keep it in mind. Guess I must have been feeling ultra sadistic when I wrote that part ( ... )

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