The Saint

[m9h]

Because Iker Casillas is my forever #1

Title: The Saint
Character: Fernando Torres, Iker Casillas, Xabi Alonso, David Beckham, Cesc Fàbregas, mentioned Victoria Beckham, Olalla Dominguez
Pairing: Iker Casillas/Fernando Torres, Xabi Alonso/Fernando Torres, David Beckham/Fernando Torres, David Beckham/Victoria Beckham, mentioned Fernando Torres/

Comments

[shangrilove]

Awww, this made me feel really bad for Xabi. Poor guy, it's always the one who's most there for you the one who's also overlooked. I really like Iker though, he was so playful and defiant at David during the awards ceremony and not just another pretty face. I like how he toyed with Nando, and Cesc was in on it! This is such a fun fic, and you've fixed up a lot of stuff since the one you sent me.

There's just some small things.

Fernando surprise at the sudden movement and on reflect push Iker's chest.
I think you meant reflex, not reflect. Reflex is sudden movement, reflect is when light hits something and bounces back.

But keep up the great work. I love all the drama, it makes me feel so excited.

[m9h]

Hahaha *hugs and 'I'm sorry' Xabi!*

Oops you still correcting me :D

Thank you very much for all your feedback! Really give me much courage to write more.