Jared's Ghost (3/3)

[lyryk_fics]

Comments

[firesign10]

That was really stunning. I was so captivated and tense and worried, both with the Sri Lanka part and the way things were for them at home. Really lovely.

[lyryk]

Thank you so much! Very happy you liked. :-)

[lyryk]

I'm so glad you found it a good read. Thanks so much for the lovely comment. :-)

How awesome! I've never been there, but I hear it's really beautiful. :-)

[lyryk]

I hope so too! :-D

[laurathelurker]

This was beautiful they way you told the story of the relationship in flashbacks was very powerful. I would have loved to read more. I am so glad they finally sat down and talked instead of continuing to ignore the problems. Great Job.

[lyryk]

Yay, I'm so glad the flashbacks worked for you! It's really great to hear that you enjoyed reading the fic. Thanks so much. :-)

[lyryk]

Ahh your comment is so so happy-making! I really wanted to focus both on the backstory and on the action, and I'm really, really pleased that you liked both. Thank you so much for reading, and for letting me know your thoughts! <3

[fjacky]

I love that they took their time about getting together, very emotional and well written. Thanks!!!!

[lyryk]

I'm so pleased you liked the fic. Thank you! :-)