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lynzie914

Behind Glass: Part Two

Mar 27, 2010 00:28

Title: Behind Glass
Rating: PG-13
Summary: An accumulations of moments in the Watchtower as Chloe begins to heal and Oliver helps her get there. Begins directly after Warrior, and will eventually spoil everything up to Conspiracy.

A/N: The story will be completely from Chloe’s perspective as she deals with everything, so no shifts of POV for ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic: behind glass, fandom: smallville, character: oliver queen, character: chloe sullivan, ship: chloe/oliver

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lynzie914 March 28 2010, 23:37:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad your enjoying it. I hope to have the next part out soon, but I'm not sure when it'll be.

kitmerlot1213 March 27 2010, 14:15:15 UTC

I love that Oliver is giving Chloe the attention and support she needs but I think he wants her to confide him in but she isn't ready for that just yet.

lynzie914 March 28 2010, 23:39:49 UTC

Oh, he totally wants her to confide in him. He's not going to force her, but a part of him wants too. However, Chloe is no where near that point yet.

calie15 March 27 2010, 15:22:37 UTC

Trust me the length of the story more then made up for it. I like the Chloe you are writing. She isn't so much jaded as she is lonely and sad.

lynzie914 March 28 2010, 23:46:21 UTC

lol, I'm glad the length helps. I very openly admit to be long winded so the rest of the story will be longer like this.

And I'm really happy you like how I'm writing Chloe, especially because I think you write her so wonderfully in your own fics. To me I think that this season Chloe is a bit jaded, but its more that she's never moved past what happened, never let herself grieve for everything that she lost (because she lost more than just Jimmy IMO). And I really wish SV itself would delve into those issues, but since their not I guess I will. XD

sanaazzy March 27 2010, 18:37:37 UTC

This is really gorgeous and it's written so well! Can't wait for more:)

lynzie914 March 28 2010, 23:46:50 UTC

Thank you! I hope to have the next part out soon.

slytherinpunk March 27 2010, 19:00:40 UTC

I really loved this. You're doing an amazing job. What so great to me is both of them appear to be feeling the same, confused about what it is they're doing, and at the same time, we don't know where Oliver wants to take it. And I like that, the progress is excellent and key.

I also loved the small changes in their dynamic, and I like how Ollie could read her easily. I really loved him taking her to her bed the second time, even though I loved them getting caught up and ending up against a wall last time, this time it shifted well with the story, but not in a overbearing way... (I'm I making sense? I feel like I just went in circles)

I certainly hope to read more soon!

lynzie914 March 28 2010, 23:51:12 UTC

Thank you so much! And no your not talking in circles. Or I don't think you are anyways. (Of course I've been known to talk in circles myself, so I might just be able to figure them out better than others. XD)

lol, I'm glad you liked both places they ended up. I love the idea of them getting caught up at the window, but unfortantely that can't happen everytime. Or at least not realistically. lol.

And I hope (emphasis on the 'hope') to have the next part up soon.