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lynzie914

The Consequences of His Actions ( One-shot)

Feb 08, 2010 19:57

Title: The Consequences of His Actions
Fandom: Smallville
Ship: Chloe/Oliver
Prompt: Ignored Instinct
Rating: PG
Summary: He had known from the beginning that it was going to end badly, he held no delusions of it ending any other way.
Warnings: There are no actual spoilers in this, but the idea was given to me from part of an interview done by Justin ( Read more... )

fanfic, fandom: smallville, fic: the consequences of his actions, character: oliver queen, character: chloe sullivan, ship: chloe/oliver, one-shot

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lynzie914 February 9 2010, 05:35:36 UTC

Thank you!

And you never know, I left it open-ended he might have told her.

soapfan101 February 9 2010, 04:20:25 UTC

nice job...this was sad...=(

lynzie914 February 9 2010, 05:38:35 UTC

Thank you! I'm sorry about the angst, I was the one writing it and I found it sad too. I had this image of Oliver's puppy dog eyes and felt guilty for putting him through it. lol.

smallvillefics February 9 2010, 05:17:04 UTC

I thought this was a gorgeous piece. Much as I love Chlollie, the usually happy & bantering pair, I also find myself drawn to a great angst piece sometimes and this fit the bill 100%.

lynzie914 February 9 2010, 05:45:25 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm with you, I love their banter, but I also love their possible angst. And my love for Chloe couldn't help but want someone to pine for her, instead of her pining for them, and this was what came out. I'm glad that you liked it.

slytherinpunk February 9 2010, 08:47:47 UTC

I really liked this. I love that Oliver admitted to who he was, selfish and likely to break Chloe's heart. And I love that it caught him completely off guard that he was the one to fall, to end up with the potential of being the one that gets hurt. Wonderful job. (sequel?)

lynzie914 February 11 2010, 03:40:22 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked.

I won't say no to a possible sequel, but I won't make any promises either. I do have a couple of ideas rolling around in my head, but its just a matter if they cooperate when I try to get them down on paper.

dl_greenarrow February 11 2010, 00:56:58 UTC

This is heartbreakingly sad. I could really see it playing out exactly like this.

lynzie914 February 11 2010, 03:42:44 UTC

I can see it turning out like this too, which makes me sad as well. The entire time I was writing it, I just kept seeing Oliver's sad puppy dog eyes and it made me feel very guilty.

dl_greenarrow February 11 2010, 03:45:46 UTC

You mean these? :/

lynzie914 February 11 2010, 03:53:28 UTC

haha, exactly!

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