Unexpected Purchases

[lynzie914]

Title: Unexpected Purchases
Fandom: Smallville
Characters: Oliver, Lois, Clark, mentions of Chloe.
Pairing: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: PG (For references to adult things)
Warnings: One little spoiler for Escape but its tiny.
Prompt: Pregnancy Test (For Green Arrow Day)
Summary: Oliver’s quick trip to the store turns uncomfortable when Lois and Clark show

Comments

[borntobewild13]

LOL, great job. I can actually see this happening. You did an awesome job with the characterization.

[lynzie914]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. The characterizations had me worried because I haven't written for them a lot (or really any in Lois's case.)

[iluvaqt]

haha, sometimes they are. In fact most of the chemist and pharmacies I've been it that's the way it is. Toiletries, feminine products, sprays, shaving cream, toothbrushes on oneside. Painkilers, cold and flu meds, condoms and pregnancy test on the other. :D

Fantastic unbeta-ed job and I second someone's comment on characterizations. Spot on. Loved the descriptive and the introspection.

>>He didn’t think she would let him leave after he told her either.<<

He knows both his favorite girls a lot better than Clark. IMO. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

[lynzie914]

Well at least I'm right for some places, lol. Really I think that's how things should be stocked, but its not how things are around here.

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked the story. And yeah, I think Oliver knows them better two. Clark tends to not pay enough attention. XD

[alltuesday]

This was so much fun! Loved it! Lois in Chlollie fics always turn out fun to read. :)

[lynzie914]

Thank you! The funny thing was originally Lois wasn't supposed to be there, it was just supposed to be Clark. But then I was like "what if I add Lois to the mix..." and then she just kind of took over from there.

[metallicargirl]

Spot on characterization and Lois was amazing. It's her god given right to turn him into paste for that. Please write more, its very happy making.

[lynzie914]

Thank you! And as a sister myself, I totally agree! It is very much her right to turn him into paste! I'm not sure about writing more, I don't even know where I'd go with it, but maybe. I'm glad that you liked it enough to want a sequel!

Oh and serious icon love! I think I might just stare at it for a little while...

[eleigh]

Hee! There's a lot of Chlollie babyfic out there but this was one of my favorites. I laughed the entire time.

[lynzie914]

Thank you! I love reading the Chlollie babyfics, so I was super excited and slightly nervous to write this one.