Yearning to Breathe Free, part 7

Jun 25, 2009 18:59

O hai, what day is it again? OTL

This one, one after, and an epilogue. I have it all planned (very roughly) out.

Warnings for gayness and political themes.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6

New York City, United States of America 1933-1938 )

yearning to breathe free, fanfiction, axis powers hetalia, america

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lynn_pryderi June 26 2009, 02:25:31 UTC
(YOUR ICON. <3333333)

I actually meant to go into Russia's quote "concern for Lithuania's independence" but it didn't seem to fit anywhere at the end of this, so I'll probably recap it at the beginning of the next chapter.

Yeaaaaahhhh Hetalia's really inaccurate here...that's why I overrode comic canon in favor of historical canon. Although, Lithuania maintained really strict neutrality at the beginning of the war (especially when Germany offered to double-team Poland with him) but also took in thousands of Polish troops and refugees, so it seems to me they were about as neutral as America-shipping-weapons-only-to-the-Allies. (Though they also knew nothing about Germany's intention to invade in the first place, so I don't know what that was about...)

Thanks for the comment <3

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radittz June 26 2009, 03:03:21 UTC
Well, I'm afraid that you are wrong about Lithuanians ( ... )

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xxmissingnoxx June 26 2009, 02:00:15 UTC
I just found this fic today and I have to say it's AMAZING! Seriously, this is one of the best Hetalia fics I've read. <3 Can't wait for the next chapter!

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lynn_pryderi June 26 2009, 02:26:51 UTC
:DDDD Thank you very much! <33333

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inner_wings June 26 2009, 04:35:20 UTC
I am so not sick of you yet. I am exactly the opposite of being sick of you. :D
I actually really love that you break out of Hetalia canon in favor of following historical canon, because as much as I love Hetalia, the inaccuracies can be pretty grating sometimes.
I also love that you actually write Poland being a selfish jerk and Lithuania being Not Okay With It. I get a little tired of the fandom interpretation of them being BFF and never having any serious conflicts or times when they honestly piss each other off. Nope, it's all sunshine and rye fields for them~ ...yeah, sure.
And did I mention that I love America? And his slang? Ph god yes.
In conclusion, I love you forever.

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lynn_pryderi June 26 2009, 14:30:27 UTC
You make me feel all fuzzy. <3333 Thank you so much (for not being sick of me 8D)

God I love America's slang in this time period. <3

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colevic June 26 2009, 05:35:59 UTC
GOD I LOVE THIS. The history (I'm such a history whore) and the way you incorporate everyone's relationship with each other is great. Again.

The parting between Alfred and Toris was sad, but subtle. For some reason, for those two, it's the way it was expected to be. I love how you caught the little emotions in there.

Gah, I can't wait to read more. This made my day more awesome. :D

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lynn_pryderi June 26 2009, 14:31:25 UTC
Yey!! Thank you so much! <33333

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lynn_pryderi June 26 2009, 14:34:49 UTC
<333333 Thank you :>

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