idaho (iii)

[lyeon]

pg, 1629
yunho / changmin

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Comments

[lryuusei]

Ohhhh the drama. This is getting better and better. It's great that you've written in Changmin's POV, so I can kinda see where he's coming from. I don't think they are OOC, by the way. I really love how you write, like I can just feel the emotions just coming off them. And you have a plan so you sort of know where this story is going, yay~ Please update soon! =)

[lyeon]

hi! i've been itching to write from changmin's point of view for a while now but was a bit uneasy about it because that's also where i was worried things would go really out of character. i'm still not too sure about it but i'm glad it worked for you! and yes i guess my lousy plan is still a plan ahahaha. thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[lyeon]

hello again

[lyeon]

haha actually you're right, when i went back to reread what i posted i feel like i haven't been very consistent or clear about the way i've been characterising them. i guess this is the consequence of not planning things out properly in the beginning...

and also the reason why jyj hasn't really appeared is probably because i do not like them very much HAHA. that is a very lame excuse sigh sorry about that. i'll do my best to work things out and make the next part better! thanks again for commenting, it's always great to hear different points of view and it really does helps a lot when i write :)

[n3uromanc3r]

I'm really enjoying the story so far I like the way you describe how they deal with their current idleness. I don't like Changmin's attitude too much! He expects from Yunho to change things to make wonder to deal with the situation differently while he's just as passive as he thinks Yunho is while Yunho at least tries to initiate interactions which Changmin rudely ignores.

I wonder whether the news that Yunho fainted will make him think about his behaviour, his high expectations and anger. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[lyeon]

oh dear it seems changmin isn't liked very much, i didn't think he was that bad ahahaha. things will get better in the next part though? thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[gnoeltop]

Wow this is good. Im glad i found this. Hope you update soon!

[lyeon]

ahh thank you so much for this, i'm still in the process of working ... very slowly on the next part(s) ;; will do my best!!

[wilim]

wooow, I'm loving your story so far. Please update soon!!! :D
I seriously enjoy how you portray Yunho's and Changmin's POV.
My feels are just..ugh~~!
I'm super curious about what's gonna happen next!!

Please please update soon!! :D

[lyeon]

hello! ahh thank you for commenting, i'm really glad you liked it. sorry i haven't updated in so long, been busy with real life stuff but um i will try to do something about it soon! :)