idaho (iii)

[lyeon]

pg, 1629
yunho / changmin

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[lyeon]

hello again!

i didn't know how to reply to your comment at first because i felt like i misrepresented changmin or something? haahahaha.

when i was writing this i didn't think of changmin as the 'bad guy'? i actually thought of him as the one who was 'moving forward' while yunho was still mulling ... very ponderousy on the past. i don't think either of them is wrong, it's just the different ways i imagined that they would have used to cope during the hiatus period. while changmin is angry at the other three and impatient with wanting to move on, yunho is more caught up in the past and what he sees as his failure as a leader to keep the group together? this pisses changmin off because obviously changmin doesn't think of yunho as a failure, or he wouldn't have stayed on, which is why he cannot really understand and sympathises very little with what he sees as yunho's excessive moping. although i seem to have written changmin as dealing with this problem by moping himself and being quite passive-agressive about it haahaha.

instead of telling yunho directly about how he feels, changmin is settling for just cold-warring and ignoring him? that said, i think he still cares a lot for yunho though. changmin may be pissed but he can still see that something is obviously wrong, even if he has been a bit hopeless at dealing with it. which is something that will be. improved on. later.

thank you very much for commenting! i really appreciate getting this kind of feedback. this comment made me realise i should think more carefully about what i write because i might tend to get a bit slipshod about it sometimes ahaha. so yeah, thanks again! :)

[lyeon]

haha actually you're right, when i went back to reread what i posted i feel like i haven't been very consistent or clear about the way i've been characterising them. i guess this is the consequence of not planning things out properly in the beginning...

and also the reason why jyj hasn't really appeared is probably because i do not like them very much HAHA. that is a very lame excuse sigh sorry about that. i'll do my best to work things out and make the next part better! thanks again for commenting, it's always great to hear different points of view and it really does helps a lot when i write :)