Coffee and Tea (Bret Mckenzie/Taika Waititi, RPS) R

[lye]

Pairing(s) in the story: Bret Mckenzie/Taika Waititi, unrequited Bret/Jemaine and Taika/Jemaine.
Author Name/Pen Name: Lye
Author LJ Name: lye
Disclaimer: I own nothing! I wish I owned Taika, though. What fun that would be

Comments

[she_burns1]

*cries w/ mixtures of squees*

It's so bittersweet! And heartbreaking! And sad! But there is some light...I'm very choked up right now! Seriously, I never thought I could enjoy Bret/Taika but this is so fabulous!

I liked the hot bits and they were mixed so well with the sad bits, it was like putting chocolate sauce on ice cream! And yay! Loren! Kudos for tossing her in!

I might take a while to recover - this fic was that tremendous!

[lye]

You know, I never thought I would write Bret/Taika but it just sort of happened. Taika clearly belongs with Jemaine. And Loren.

Now I want ice cream! I love Loren! I could never leave her out of the picture.

Thank you so much for your feedback, I was very wary of this one but you have eased me a little bit.

[lordstarfish]

Absolutely no need to be wary - this was terrific.

-He has to ask, “Are you okay?”
“You know,” he starts, cracking a little bit of a smile. “I don’t think I am."

BRET D:

-Bret keeps his eyes trained carefully on the ground and asks, “Do you think you love me at all?”

that little bit BROKE MY HEART! I literally had to just let out a really sad sigh~

I didn't know if this would work when I read your pairing, but it certainly did. It made for a really plausible [well, plausible in a fanfiction sense :)] plot that Jemaine was absolutely clueless, but brought them together.

AHH, great job, I'm bouncing with happiness ♥

[lye]

Thank you! I'm glad this resulted in happy bouncing. In my head the original ending was actually really depressing but I couldn't bring myself to leave it because, well, who needs a sad ending?

Thanks for giving the pairing a chance!

[lye]

Thank you, love.

PS I love your icon!

[neut]

Gorgeous. I loved how you played this with such subtlety. Lovely stuff.

[lye]

Thank you <3

[forgottenbutton]

So, um, oh my gosh.

Have I mentioned late that you're kind of great?

Bret/Taika is a huge turn-on... really I think the four of them totally swing, if the sexual tension and mutual fondness in this photo were not obvious enough.

[lye]

Dude, they have to swing. They should be everyone's OT4.

[forgottenbutton]

They are certainly mine. <3

[lye]

The two of us will get the ball rolling. It'll be sexy. <3