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lycaness

A Lesson A Day (could kill you)... Part 7

Jul 10, 2008 01:06

Jared shut the door and leaned his back against it. He looked down at the lack of erection in his jeans, and didn’t stop the tears from falling from his eyes as he slid to the floor. That hadn’t been him; he didn’t act like that. He was so aggressive, so demanding; he hadn’t even gotten slightly hard, even from the noises Jensen had made. And ( Read more... )

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garvaldmains July 11 2008, 05:46:08 UTC

OMG babe, mend him now... Not my Jay...

*hugs* Dix

lycaness July 11 2008, 09:37:43 UTC

*hides*
He's been broken for a long time. Poor Jay *hold him*

mikeyrhcp July 12 2008, 06:31:13 UTC

THIS IS AMAZING! Really strong chapter!

lycaness July 12 2008, 15:35:54 UTC

Thank you, I'm really glad you thought so.
I get a little worried about some of these bits and how people are going to take them so I'm really pleased it came across in the right way for you.
Thanks honey, glad you're enjoying it*hugs*

unrequited666 July 16 2008, 07:25:10 UTC

Oh no... Jared's afraid he's become the abuser now... *sobs*

lycaness July 16 2008, 08:57:09 UTC

He is messed up and it would kill Jared if he became like his abuser. Poor guy. *hold him close*

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lycaness November 7 2008, 11:39:29 UTC

Yeah, I really layed this chapter on thick didn't I?
Poor Jared, he's so abused. *hugs*

samantha890 January 31 2011, 08:48:35 UTC

Oh God, please don't tell me it's Jared's father? Or Misha?

I am in absolute love with your Sandy. She's absolutely beautiful. I read a fic before in which Dean was traumatized by rape, and when Sam had to leave in fear of making Dean do something he didn't want - Dean somehow survived, with Bobby's help - and later, a girl he met at the hospital, and she became kind of the only person he could touch. Anyway, point is, I hated that girl in the story - not because she was written badly or anything,but just because I didn't like that third person between Sam and Dean - but here, in your story? I don't know what the difference is, but I absolutely adore your Sandy. And those last few paragraphs were heartbreaking in their sincerity and love. <3

...and he would be rocked and shushed until he’d cried everything he had. He’d be told that he’d always be safe there, that no one was going to get to him while he was there. And he knew it was true. - This is absolutely terrifying. The way you worded this, it could very well be some nice ( ... )