Ownership - Part Ten

Aug 21, 2010 01:09

Part Ten )

bigbang, ownership, j2

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keerawa August 21 2010, 22:09:06 UTC
Pssst - this part'll be a lot easier to read if you add some line breaks.

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lycaness August 21 2010, 22:11:02 UTC
psst back - I know, it's going to get sperated into two parts because LJ says it's too big when I try to add the spaces. It's frustrating.
Thanks for reading, I hope you're enjoying it. :)

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keerawa August 21 2010, 22:29:43 UTC
Ooof, that is frustrating! 10A and 10B perhaps?

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lycaness August 21 2010, 22:32:00 UTC
Yep that's the plan, but when I tried to post this I had trouble with the LJ cuts so my beta did it for my using HTML format which I have no idea how to use, so I'm waiting until she has time to help with this problem.

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ariss_tenoh August 21 2010, 22:32:21 UTC
Have to agree about the line breaks^^ I had to skip through it because it was difficult to read.

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lycaness August 21 2010, 22:39:50 UTC
This will be fixed once I get the chance to get with my beta again. I'm sorry, I hate it, but LJ wouldn't let me put them in as it said even one space added made the post too large. With my beta's help it will be split into two parts 10a and 10b, I'm sorry for the trouble. :(

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insane_songbird August 22 2010, 01:09:29 UTC
theory: while the whole pack is witnessing the birth (and chad and Chris are fucking like bunnies), Jared is all alone... perfect place for Sterling to strike! Just saying... Grab Jay, wait for Jen to go looking for him. Kill Jen, claim Jay. It's a battle plan ;)
chad and chris? THANK GOODNESS! chris knew all along? why did he wait so long? ESPECIALLY after chad saved his hide. isn't that proof is sincerity enough? He must have talked himself out of it sooo well, that he was unable to talk himself back into it without a shove and a kick in the butt.
God, it's 3am and I would love to finish this fic today, but this chapter took me forever to read because my concentration if fading *faints*
I'll leave the last of the ice cream here so chris and chad can do nasty little food-kink games with it :D chris didn't get any ice cream yet... and I bet chad really doesn't mind being the dish, i'd gather.

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lycaness October 2 2010, 22:03:41 UTC
Lol, nice theory buuuuut no, haha. Not all the pack are at the birth, just the select few like the alpha pair, Jensen, Jim, maybe Jason or some other close friends, but it's pretty intimate.

I know, about time huh? In answer to your query about Chris waiting so long: yes he didn't talk himself out of it really well, but also he never viewed himself as good enough for Chad, never really believed he deserved him or would be able to make him happy. Chris maybe the tough guy but when it comes to emotions he's a terrified little kid. Bless him.

LMAO, I've been so loving your ice cream sharing throughout this fic, made me laugh out loud many a time. :D

*hugs you*

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twinsarein August 22 2010, 04:12:46 UTC
Wow! What a lot of good things happening in this chapter. It was a nice break from the tension, and I have the feeling that it will be short lived. Sterling isn't going to be absent forever. In fact, I'm worried that he's going to attack while everyone is so busy. Jared is strong, but if Sterling comes with back up, Jared doesn't have a prayer.

Still, I loved the connecting that the two Js are doing, and I'm thrilled that the two Cs have finally come together (soooo hot, btw).

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lycaness October 2 2010, 22:06:10 UTC
Hmm, that seems a popular theory, but you know what happens already, so I won't put a spoiler in here for other people to read, lol.
Isn't it about time C2 got together? And I'm thrilled you found them hot, thank you for that. And yes, had to have J2 connecting and yay that they're finally becoming intimate in some small way. :D
Thank you honey. *hugs*

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GREAT COUPLE bewitchedjc August 22 2010, 20:16:13 UTC
That is so sweet. I love how Chris is with Chad. I would never have thought that he loved Chad but I can see him doing that him being protector all. I can see him not wanting to tell someone he loved them to protect them. Man they are so HOT!! together.

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Re: GREAT COUPLE lycaness August 23 2010, 16:10:47 UTC
Hehe, I LOVE Chris/Chad, they're currently my fav pairing. Yeah, Chris might have come across as cruel but he really was trying to be good. He's known Chad since Chad was born, watched him grow up, so it seemed wrong to him that he would want Chad, but hey, love it love and it can't be fought. :D And you're right, they're very hot together. Glad you liked it. :D

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