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insane_songbird August 21 2010, 16:11:34 UTC
*gapes*
You EVIL WOMAN! Seriously? Seriously! Oh... Jensen worked sooo hard on getting himself together and now he's like 20 thousand steps backwards and Jared will so not like it in the morning. I hope he remembers something because seriously there are little worse things than being accused of rape, especially since Jensen is the only person he actually liked! Oh GOD!
Seriously, now Jensen is gonna be traumatized and petrified and emotionally shackled to Jared who is probably scaring the shit out of him after this... and Jared will be his big cuddly self and can't understand why Jensen is shying away. And the bond wants them to be all PDAish while Jensen would like to find a whole to crawl into and die. Is there a suicide warning? *goes to check* no... thank goodness (well depression and PTSD is bad enough, which is see on the horizon! and maybe Jensen just won't be alone enough to do too stupid stuff... what with a fresh bond and such.
Ohhh, you are killing me here! *wibbles*

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lycaness August 21 2010, 16:19:08 UTC
*bounces and grins* I knew you'd love that. :D
Yes, poor poor Jensen, this is really going to screw with him and poor Jared. It's not looking good. *sigh*
I know, I'm evil, I tried to be good but it just wasn't possible.
Glad you're enjoying it. :D

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Hee hee emmathene September 15 2010, 13:03:16 UTC
I have to say insane, your comments are almost as good as the story. :-)

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Re: Hee hee insane_songbird September 15 2010, 13:05:37 UTC
LOL thanks. These are Lyca-special edition because I know she liked it. And they say size doesn't matter *cackles*

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twinsarein August 21 2010, 18:18:47 UTC
Well, now I know one of the reasons this story is so long - it's going to take Jensen a while to recover from that, especially since he's been staying away from sexual contact for fifty years. Jared has some work cut out for him.

I feel for him, and am glad he has so many caring family around. I feel for Jared, too - it wasn't maliciously done, but he's still going to feel pretty bad about what he did.

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lycaness August 21 2010, 18:25:24 UTC
I can't write short stories, I've tried but the shorter I try to make them the longer they end up, lol.
It's going to take a lot for Jensen to recover and I'm sorry but I'm evil and the pain hasn't ended yet. He does have an amazing family, but will he accept their support?
Poor Jared, it really wasn't his fault.
Thanks for the comments, I love them. :D

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LOVE THIS STORY. bewitchedjc August 22 2010, 01:03:31 UTC
I love this story, just started reading it and am enjoying it thourouhly. I hope you tells us more about Jared and why, he is so good at fighting. Poor Jensen to be taken like that when all he wanted to do was help Jared. Poor Jared who never wanted to hurt anyone is going to be guilt ridded for letting that primal side of him lose control and take Jensen like that. Hope it'll work out for them cause according to your story now there bonded somehow. What does that mean that they can hear each other thoughts or something?

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dianamartins October 9 2010, 21:09:34 UTC
Wow~ this is an evil chapter! :) I love it!

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hannahbellejude March 17 2011, 04:33:52 UTC
I really wanted the boys to mate but not like that. Poor Jensen! Their relationship is going to be so difficult with that beginning. And Jensen was already struggling with feelings of weakness and inadequacy.

I know Jared was overwhelmed by everything that was happening but I still feel a little bit disappointed that he wasn't strong enough to control himself.

Off to the next chapter...

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