Ownership - Part Two

[lycaness]

Comments

[insane_songbird]

I'm not sure if Jared isn't already too far gone for the watch and tell routine. I am seriously having a baaaad feeling here. I read a non-con warning and since J2 can only be bonded to each other (or you need to fight off the angry mob with the hay forks and the burning broomsticks *cough*) I am seeing bad things in the future. Jared is NOT in a good mood and this whole secrecy thingy Jeff and the others have going seriously didn't help.
And I really hope he will heal most of his scars... maybe not the eye, but yeah.
(and yes I will comment on every chapter because I know you love it and I suck at summing up all my thoughts at the end. I rather speculate :P )

[lycaness]

Lol, have I ever told you I love you? You're awesome.
Hmm, what to say about your theories.
You're right, Jared is not in a good mood, not at all.
Um, nope, I'm just gonna make you read it. Hehe.
*hugs*

[twinsarein]

You have some amazing emotions going on here. I'm really enjoying the build up of tension - waiting for Jared to change mostly, but also to find out about his mystery, how the Js relationship will develop, how strong Jared's going to be (cause you know he's an alpha), etc. I'm also anxious about the Sterling pack.

[lycaness]

Glad you're liking the emotions, sometimes it's really hard to get the balance right. Oh Jared's change will be an intersting one. And yes, of course Jared's an alpha lol.
More on Sterling later don't worry.

[dianamartins]

Wow! Awesome chapter, love it! ;)

[drea78]

I really love this so far!!
I don't think I'll have time to read it all in one go, but so I have more to look forward to.
I adore Jensen already and like Chris, Jeff and Sam and their protectiveness.
Great work! :-)

[hannahbellejude]

Poor Jared - it's a lot to take in. Jensen is being so patient and gentle with him :D

And yay for more Chris in this part.