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The Last Doughnut Part 10

Feb 01, 2011 10:30

Title: The Last Doughnut
Author: Marsabi
Summary: When Damian disinherits Luke, can he survive in the “real” world? Will he drive Reid crazy in the process?
Disclaimer: Owned by ATWT
Rating: PG- NC-17 (depends on chapter)
Warning: none
A companion to Camp Queer
Thanks traciamc for the read

PART 10 Up on the roof

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!author|artist: marsabi, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

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marsabi February 1 2011, 18:41:32 UTC

Thanks! Due to the talk over at Noah Who, I am not fond of Holden right now,and it was hard for me to remember to forget that in this universe. So thanks! I think in this fic he is good and has a kind heart. My next story might be pro-Damian though LOL!!

You are right= Luke is incredible here. Even if Reid did not thank him, he did pick Luke first and wait on the food. That is pure Reid love, right? As for the plan, stop peeking into my brain !

I remember that comment, hmm...Maybe it can creep in somewhere.

Thanks so much for the great feedback. I loved it!

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marsabi February 1 2011, 19:32:27 UTC

Oh, sorry..I forget not everybody wanders over there. I do remember that hug part with Damian and loved it! I only have Damian bad here because of canon (he was a jerk to Luke about the gay thing at first and it fit for Camp Queer/Damian did try and send him to the camp on the show).

The talk with Holden on NW is basically how he is a douche with Luke. When Damian disappears, Holden just expects Luke to get over it and accept it. Holden might have killed Damian and yet Holden is supposed to be good dad? There was some comparing of Holden to Noah too, and how they are both so judgemental...I can send you a link to NW?

They are actually showing the entire Reid story again right now - a lot of fun!

joann414 February 1 2011, 18:34:54 UTC

So glad Casey came clean. Sex on the roof was great, and I love Reid's willingness to say I love you. Great chapter.

marsabi February 1 2011, 18:43:15 UTC

Thanks! I do think Reid would be simple and honest about saying ILY. I did not want him like Noah and have issues with it. And now, he can start to see that Luke's love is fierce/true and not just a first crush... I appreciate your comment!

bluemagicrose February 1 2011, 21:47:15 UTC

Rooftop sex. :D

Good boy Casey. Lily is so damn weak. I wonder what Reid has up his sleeve...

Great chapter. Write faster! Need the next one immediately. :)

marsabi February 2 2011, 00:31:21 UTC

LOl! I'll try!

I had to put them on the roof in here at some point...

gypsiesheart February 1 2011, 23:28:48 UTC

Love me some rooftop sex! And Luke declaring his love for Reid by shouting it from the rooftops was perfect, but I thought you were going to have him fall off or something soap opera worldly like that! LOL!!!

marsabi February 2 2011, 00:32:58 UTC

OMG, that would be so cruel to have him fall. I think being beaten up, and having Lily as his mother is enough LOL!
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!

greek_09 February 2 2011, 03:39:42 UTC

A picnic on the roof, cool! All that good food and Luke to ravish. Mmmm, sex on the rooftop.

Casey confessing, thank you God. I was hoping he would, he's just too good a guy not to and the fact that he's willing to help them is so nice.

Lily just needs to get a clue.

marsabi February 2 2011, 12:40:18 UTC

Casey is too nice ! His problems are usually from stupid mistakes, but he has a good heart. I had so many scenes on the roof in Camp Queer, I had to get one in this companion story LOL. I thought it was a good place for Luke's ILY. Thanks for the comment!