The Last Doughnut Part 10

Feb 01, 2011 10:30

Title: The Last Doughnut
Author: Marsabi
Summary: When Damian disinherits Luke, can he survive in the “real” world? Will he drive Reid crazy in the process?
Disclaimer: Owned by ATWT
Rating: PG- NC-17 (depends on chapter)
Warning: none
A companion to Camp Queer
Thanks traciamc for the read

PART 10 Up on the roof

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!author|artist: marsabi, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

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rtruffles February 1 2011, 16:58:59 UTC
Another amazing chapter! I'm so glad that Casey confessed and that the three of them will work together to defeat Damian!

Thanks for having Holden stand up to Lily!! That was great.

The rooftop was sweet and hot and loving! I love them having sex and food. It's just so them! LOL

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marsabi February 1 2011, 17:15:50 UTC
You're right -food and sex LOL - is always good for them. But I wanted Reid to need the sex/Luke first...that is how much he loves Luke LOL

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shar_jere February 1 2011, 17:50:31 UTC
I Love you and sexytime on a rooftop was just what the boys needed..hmmm reid has a plan to get Damian while he is at it he should teach lily a thing or two..

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marsabi February 1 2011, 18:32:29 UTC
Thanks- the rooftop scenes in CQ was all teasing, here they get to follow through LOL

Lily does deserve to suffer...Thanks for the feedback!

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f3d0ragirl February 1 2011, 17:50:41 UTC
Luke climbed back down . “You better believe me,” he threatened, “Or so help me Reid, I’ll tattoo it on my ass.”

^ ah, hey....now THAT i wanna see. LMAO. :-P

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marsabi February 1 2011, 18:33:24 UTC
LOL- Me too. MAybe they will take a trip to a tattoo place in another fic , but I doubt Reid would let him do it here...Thanks for reading!

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jem_018 February 1 2011, 17:50:52 UTC
Loved the rooftop top part. The shouting and the HOT sex and the picnic was amazing. :D

I was giggling when Reid admitted that Luke sucked as a waiter. Oh, dear. :P

I'm glad that Casey confessed. Now they can figure out how to deal with that mess.

great chapter. :)

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marsabi February 1 2011, 18:34:44 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, Reid could only pretend Luke was a good waiter for so long LOL, but I'd like to think he also told him to put his mind at ease about returning to work.

They will start to put the plan into action soon!

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alissablue February 1 2011, 17:52:45 UTC
Wonderful^^!

I loooooved the picnic on the roof and the visual of Luke standing there in slippers, a robe and his hospital gown with that smile on his face XD. And yay, he said "I love you"<3!

But I'm a little worried now... Damian? That can't be good!

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marsabi February 1 2011, 18:35:52 UTC
Thanks!! I too like the vision of Luke in cute slippers. Ever since Camp Queer, I wanted a roof scene for this story too.

Reid and Luke are working together...how can Damian stand up to true love , right? No worries

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