Comments | lunaste: TWILIGHT RUINS EVERYTHING

lunaste

TWILIGHT RUINS EVERYTHING

Jan 27, 2009 01:20

I am writing an original story (the vampire story I might have mentioned a few times) and I'm posting it in the writing section of a fashion forum, to get instant feedback but mostly to keep me going ( Read more... )

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devilyouwere January 27 2009, 01:34:17 UTC

*holds* :(

lunaste January 27 2009, 10:05:23 UTC

Haha, thanks :)

:CCCC

angary January 27 2009, 03:28:38 UTC

D:

D:

I'm 20000483% positive that it's not as bad. Nothing can be as fail as that.

...Link, please?

lunaste January 27 2009, 10:06:31 UTC

I knoooow, I thought I'd at least write better than SMeyer.
But, the girl who said that meant it as a compliment DDD:

Well, I've posted it here and it's in English but it's on a Dutch forum, so everything surrounding it might not make much sense.

angary January 28 2009, 03:23:13 UTC

DDD:, indeed.

I just caught up with the story, and I have to say, verrrry interesting set-up you have there! It's fast-paced and engaging, which I like, and just as I thought, the plot isn't made of fail like the Twilight series. I'm sure the girl meant well (to each her own), but I personally don't see how your story can be compared to BD AT ALL. Unless if Eric impregnates Mari and it turns out that Jonah is a werewolf who ends up falling in love with her kid....

What I love most of all about your story is - and this might seem kind of strange, considering the actual social/romantic drama that's evolving - the "meta" stuff you mention in the narration, like how things are in the universe regarding vampire rights and how they're trying to fit into society, and doing things like getting people to donate their blood.
I'm intrigued to see where your story is going to go, so I'm adding the site to my bookmarks and I'll check up on it, if you don't mind. Also, love the drawings you made! :)

lunaste January 29 2009, 17:31:33 UTC

Your icon just made me laugh so hard, I don't even know ( ... )

twasadark January 27 2009, 04:27:41 UTC

Hide all sharp implements - I wouldn't want you to plunge them into your heart.

lunaste January 27 2009, 10:09:12 UTC

Haha, I'm not that desperate yet. I'm still in denial, I think D:

credulesque January 27 2009, 16:21:21 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA

lunaste January 27 2009, 16:44:36 UTC

WITH A RAKE

credulesque January 27 2009, 16:47:05 UTC

I BRING ~*~*~ LINKY FU~*~*~