TWILIGHT RUINS EVERYTHING
I am writing an original story (the vampire story I might have mentioned a few times) and I'm posting it in the writing section of a fashion forum, to get instant feedback but mostly to keep me going
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Wow, thank you!
It's just the first draft, so I'm basically making it up as I go along, I already know some things I'm going to change when I go over it again.
Yeah, there are a lot of teenage girls on that forum and many of them think OMG TWILIGHT IS THE BEST THING EVER so she did mean it in a nice way.
But thanks!
Oooh, I like that you like that. I thought that would be a bit too boring so I try not to throw huge chunks of exposition out all the time, but like, it's so integral to the story that these vampires are like wild animals driven into a corner and that they either have to hide or disappear from the face of the earth. I wanted to go with more traditional vampires, but I can't pick and choose all the vampire traits I like because I had to really plan out what traits they could and couldn't have if they had to masquerade as humans (I prefer vampires that can't go out in the light, but they kind of have to).
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :D I post it there mainly to get encouragement to write on (that sounds bad, but I know myself, I would have given up a long time ago if I was the only one who knew that I was writing this, now I am making it past my mortal enemy: the 17K mark :') ).
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