Happy Birthday daera23We talked about this fic a long time ago, so I thought I'd finish it up for you for you b-day. Hope you have a great day, sweetie
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Booyah! I like your in control Sark, I also like your Maybe I Miscalculated Rather Badly Here...Lauren. I never bought that she was the top in their relationship and this little fic fills in the BG I needed to get that sorted in my head.
This line: "Naked and soft and with her most private parts spread for the world to see." is fabulous. Especially in context of the paragraph where it's from.
Good Job chica...now to only finish my little tale...
I had a strange proclivity towards Lauren/Sark before this, but this certainly heightened it.
After all, she had spent years learning how to encourage the male devotion that she so readily used to her advantage. Men were weak, easy to please, and Lauren understood well that if you knew how to keep someone happy, you had control over them. Women, on the other hand, had subtlety. Tact. They understood manipulation. All that was necessary for a woman to come out on top was to stop believing all the bullshit that men had been trying to lay on them since the dawn of time. Once a woman recognized and acknowledged her potential, nothing could stand in her way.
Hee. That's SO true! I definitely try to live by that. ;)
He nodded, folding his hands together. “Butterflies are beautiful, and elegant. Something meant to be worshipped as the delicate creatures they are.”
Sweet, yet oddly disturbing. This especially;
And she had no doubt that he’d take just as much pleasure in ripping off her wings, if it no longer
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Aw, thanks Dot. :) I'm glad you liked it. I was aiming for 'slightly disturbing' so I'm glad I hit the mark. Lauren and Sark have the ability to be quite hot and yet heart-twisting at the same time. :)
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This line: "Naked and soft and with her most private parts spread for the world to see." is fabulous. Especially in context of the paragraph where it's from.
Good Job chica...now to only finish my little tale...
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now to only finish my little tale...
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Well done. :-)
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I had a strange proclivity towards Lauren/Sark before this, but this certainly heightened it.
After all, she had spent years learning how to encourage the male devotion that she so readily used to her advantage. Men were weak, easy to please, and Lauren understood well that if you knew how to keep someone happy, you had control over them. Women, on the other hand, had subtlety. Tact. They understood manipulation. All that was necessary for a woman to come out on top was to stop believing all the bullshit that men had been trying to lay on them since the dawn of time. Once a woman recognized and acknowledged her potential, nothing could stand in her way.
Hee. That's SO true! I definitely try to live by that. ;)
He nodded, folding his hands together. “Butterflies are beautiful, and elegant. Something meant to be worshipped as the delicate creatures they are.”
Sweet, yet oddly disturbing. This especially;
And she had no doubt that he’d take just as much pleasure in ripping off her wings, if it no longer ( ... )
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~~Jenn
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