GK Fic: Mr Frosty Part V

Mar 02, 2011 14:45

Part V )

gk fic, mr frosty

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ringhelediel March 3 2011, 19:10:35 UTC
Epic fic with an actual op! you spoil us~

(Ray-Ray's diatribes=LOVE. AND. I love Trombley to bits in this, you managed to make him sound adorable and turned Walt into a complete geek. And you made that supposed LSA scene go up a notch, by dismantling the mustang's innards XDD)

p/s: trolley's art knocked up the anticipation just that much more!

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lunasky March 3 2011, 23:46:32 UTC
I freely admit--the plot went a little crazy on this one. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it and that you liked the boys. It's hard to find that balance with Trombley so I'm crazy happy you liked him here.

And yes, Trolley is a goddess of epic proportions. :D

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sparky77 March 4 2011, 00:03:17 UTC
This story made me so insanely happy!!! So much love!

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lunasky March 5 2011, 03:13:18 UTC
Wheee! Thanks so much!

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glitterglam13 March 4 2011, 02:27:51 UTC
This was absolutely awesome. Loved the plot, the way you advanced it, your Brad, Nate and everyone else were absolutely wonderful and the ending was perfect. So much fun.

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lunasky March 5 2011, 03:14:06 UTC
Yay. I'm glad to know the ending worked and the plot was fun. Thanks so much!

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laura_iskra March 4 2011, 13:52:45 UTC
what an awesome story!

I'm almost happy I didn't have much time to read in these two days so I got to savor it more :p

but now I'm going to read it again and again, there are so many incredibly satisfying details!

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lunasky March 5 2011, 03:15:02 UTC
Aw, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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melkerr March 4 2011, 21:25:46 UTC
*Stands up and claps*

God DAMN, this is such a brilliantly epic story! Love how the dynamic between the guys work effortlessly in this verse, and the tension between Nate and Brad. Unf! The structure is precise, it's so well written! The plot! THE PLOT! <3 I have a grin threatening to split my face in half, I shall read it again now because it is just. so. good. Blargh I hate you but not really

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lunasky March 5 2011, 03:16:15 UTC
Aw, thanks so much! I'm so glad to know the tension between Brad and Nate was believable and that the plot worked as well. Thanks for the comment! :D

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