I liked the idea of the story and the comparison of Aoi with the snow. Beautiful, cold and with love between them thawing. I especially liked this line. placing both his hands on his naked waist and just like snow … they felt so cold. But bless Reita, warming Kai up :)
Yeah, I was thinking about it, as I was on the bus someday, and looking at an empty branch, and for some reason unknown to me I saw the image of snow falling from that very branch which was a sad concept, and then my brain wen ton its "Let me write a one shot from it" tangent.
Sorry to disturb I know you are probably not in this scene anymore, but I was replying to a comment below yours, and I saw your icon! I love Joseph Gordon Levitt and people give him so much for granted, so this is the first time I saw someone with an icon about him.
I just changed my icon into one with him recently :D Since I've been reading a bit of Inception fics lately. He's really great, did you see his newish movie 50/50. I just can't with his face there.
the story is good, but i should pause in some occasion coz i don;t know the meaning of the some words :P i need to broaden my vocabulary LOL sad thing is, i never, even once in my 17 years OLD life, saw a snow. we don't have snow in Bali :( and now i really NEED to see and maybe, feel the snow. ugh btw, who says you don't have a masterpiece? you get a lot of masterpiece on your LJ :) and eventhough i hate the thing about cheating, i like the story :) thanks for sharing :)
YOU ARE FROM BALI?!?!?!?!?! WTF!!!! HOW COOL IS THAT?!?!? SOOOOOOO COOL!!! \(♥_♥ \)
*Coughs* ... uhm yeah sorry for the big words~ I really like using some of them, they sound more ... poetic, I suppose? m(_ _)m
LOLOLOL You flatter me too much and ... I hadn't really considered this as cheating but INDEED IT IS. Wow, hadn't even realized ... and HOURGLASS is totally about cheating!!! AHAHAHAHHA ... never mind guess I have written about cheating uh? ... still HATE it anyways.
And thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it gives you *gigantic AOI snowman*
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And thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it gives you *gigantic AOI snowman*
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Yeah, I was thinking about it, as I was on the bus someday, and looking at an empty branch, and for some reason unknown to me I saw the image of snow falling from that very branch which was a sad concept, and then my brain wen ton its "Let me write a one shot from it" tangent.
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Sorry to disturb I know you are probably not in this scene anymore, but I was replying to a comment below yours, and I saw your icon! I love Joseph Gordon Levitt and people give him so much for granted, so this is the first time I saw someone with an icon about him.
That's all, lol great ICON!
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sad thing is, i never, even once in my 17 years OLD life, saw a snow. we don't have snow in Bali :( and now i really NEED to see and maybe, feel the snow. ugh
btw, who says you don't have a masterpiece? you get a lot of masterpiece on your LJ :) and eventhough i hate the thing about cheating, i like the story :) thanks for sharing :)
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*Coughs* ... uhm yeah sorry for the big words~ I really like using some of them, they sound more ... poetic, I suppose? m(_ _)m
LOLOLOL You flatter me too much and ... I hadn't really considered this as cheating but INDEED IT IS. Wow, hadn't even realized ... and HOURGLASS is totally about cheating!!! AHAHAHAHHA ... never mind guess I have written about cheating uh? ... still HATE it anyways.
And thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it gives you *gigantic AOI snowman*
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