Comments | lumifan99: It's a Pirate's Life for Me (NC-17 Part 1/1)

lumifan99

It's a Pirate's Life for Me (NC-17 Part 1/1)

Jul 20, 2011 13:20

It's a Pirate's Life for Me

Summary: It started out as an innocent conversation; it ended with Mark fulfilling a fantasy for Lexie. Pure smut.

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catagory: smut

Comments 10

gwenaelle_24 July 20 2011, 19:19:59 UTC

that was fun, I'm not really into pirates myself but I like that Mark wants to make Lexie's fantasies come true.

lumifan99 July 21 2011, 12:51:34 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. I love the idea of Mark fufilling Lexie's fantasies.

lussy83 July 20 2011, 19:36:47 UTC

Wow, that was great. Captain Jack Sparrow is really hot and I can't even imagine how hot Captain Sloan is.

The scene with Mark and Lexie eating Lucky Charms was really cute.

lumifan99 July 21 2011, 12:56:47 UTC

The way I picture Captain Sloan he is extremely hot! For some reason I can picture Lexie Mark and Lexie sharing a bowl of cereal or any kind food the that matter really easily.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

lexiesloan July 20 2011, 22:27:12 UTC

I'm going to consider this my birthday present ;)

I am so happy you finally wrote this and it was as hot as I thought it would be! Does this mean I have to write the 3some story now?

lumifan99 July 21 2011, 12:59:00 UTC

You should definatly consider this a birthday present. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, by the way. I hope you have a good one!

I happy I finally worte this to, and I am so happy you liked it. You don't have to write the 3some story, but just so you know, my birthday is in about a month and a half. ;)

lewie45 July 20 2011, 23:19:47 UTC

I love it, funny how you mentioned Lucky Charms, I realized yesterday I've never had any of the "cool" cereals. When I was a kid only when we went camping did we get Fruit Loops and Frosted Flakes, other than that it was Cheerio's, Corn Flakes, Rice Crispy's and Shreddies. Some of the cereal names out there make me wanna puke. LOL

Okay I love the idea of Mark surprising Lexie by playing out one of her fantasies...and she never voices it as a fantasy but it works. I love that he does it for her and gets completely into it and researches it. :)

lumifan99 July 21 2011, 13:01:10 UTC

For some reason I just think Mark really likes surgary cereals. And now I am kind of hungry for frosted flakes.Thank you so much for reading. I am so happy you liked it!

lewie45 July 21 2011, 13:04:11 UTC

Yeah I can see him probably having them as a kid, it being one of the few things that he got from home. I highly doubt that Derek's parent's bought sugary cereal's, I know with my family part of it was the cost and part of it was it's not good for you. LOL Anyway I could see it as a comfort food for Mark.

lizzy29 August 16 2011, 21:13:20 UTC

That was just awesome and HOT loved it you write awesome smut