This was awesome! I can see why you were nervous because I know that first person would make me nervous, but you did a really great job! I was really surprised, not because of you but because in general first person fanfics can get kind of weird. However, this was great! It makes me want to know more. However, it is also fine as just a oneshot/drabble. I liked this a lot!
"Little Sakura would wave to him everyday when he passed by, dropping her dolls to blow him a kiss." OMG, I just fell in love with that image. Like a whole lot. <3
Yes, ma'am! It's my turn indeed. *cracks knuckles* I shall do my best!
(If all goes well, I'll be able to go on a spamming spree over the next few days.)
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Sombrero.
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You can't hold the sombrero away from me.
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*squishes Eldr*
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Yes, ma'am! It's my turn indeed. *cracks knuckles* I shall do my best!
(If all goes well, I'll be able to go on a spamming spree over the next few days.)
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HEY, YOU NEED TO WRITE MOAR OF THIS, LIKE, NAO.
I MEAN IT! *GLANCES AT RODRIGO* PLEAAAAAAASE?!
*PAKKUN EYES*
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ACK! NO! NOT THE PAKKUN EYES!
*sigh* Kakashi nearly died thanks to the Pakkun eyes.
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That is all.
XD
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