Lost

Mar 16, 2010 14:07

I felt like writing an small AU last night. With no plot in mind, I put the Ipod on shuffle and ended up with this.

It's first person, and I feel very weird about that.

Lost )

au, one-shot, kakasaku

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omizu March 16 2010, 18:18:53 UTC
I love it and I want more. I will also do most anything to get what I want.

Sombrero.

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lulu_42 March 17 2010, 14:03:13 UTC
*wibble*

You can't hold the sombrero away from me.

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eldrfire March 16 2010, 20:40:29 UTC
This was awesome! I can see why you were nervous because I know that first person would make me nervous, but you did a really great job! I was really surprised, not because of you but because in general first person fanfics can get kind of weird. However, this was great! It makes me want to know more. However, it is also fine as just a oneshot/drabble. I liked this a lot!

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lulu_42 March 17 2010, 14:04:24 UTC
First person= uncomfortable.

*squishes Eldr*

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bluerising March 16 2010, 21:56:25 UTC
Mmm! Solider-Kakashi sounds delicious, and so does pre-med student Sakura ( ... )

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lulu_42 March 17 2010, 14:16:51 UTC
XDDD Your review is almost as long as my story ( ... )

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bluerising March 17 2010, 22:27:36 UTC
"Little Sakura would wave to him everyday when he passed by, dropping her dolls to blow him a kiss." OMG, I just fell in love with that image. Like a whole lot. <3

Yes, ma'am! It's my turn indeed. *cracks knuckles* I shall do my best!

(If all goes well, I'll be able to go on a spamming spree over the next few days.)

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zelha March 17 2010, 00:03:29 UTC
*GAPES*

HEY, YOU NEED TO WRITE MOAR OF THIS, LIKE, NAO.

I MEAN IT! *GLANCES AT RODRIGO* PLEAAAAAAASE?!

*PAKKUN EYES*

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lulu_42 March 17 2010, 14:19:04 UTC
BUT I'M OUT OF STORY! :(

ACK! NO! NOT THE PAKKUN EYES!

*sigh* Kakashi nearly died thanks to the Pakkun eyes.

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shadow_saur March 17 2010, 20:21:52 UTC
...this is the awesome.

That is all.

XD

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lulu_42 March 18 2010, 16:17:37 UTC
Thanks for reading! :)

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