It's a post for the KakaSaku LJ New Years Challege. I wasn't planning on doing it, but I was under the influence of cold medicine. That's probably why I came up with something that wasn't a comedy piece. 'Tis Drama!
Weird.
Title: Asphyxiation
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,570
Summary: War is kinder to some than others.
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This was clever and completely fabulous. Especially the emphasis on the "clean ozone" around Kakashi and how his virtue increased in the time of war, while poor Sakura was a mess (in a lovable way). Then the ending... <3
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The cold medicine told me I should do something gritty, because I tend to shy away from it. (I still couldn't resist the sweet ending.) Everyone's entries have been so amazing that I had to add a lot more effort in order to keep up.
I was trying to imply that Kakashi had been fighting recently with the reference to ozone. I don't know if it worked or not. XD
Glad that you liked it!
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LOL. I'm got to go through my fridge and make lots of food icons
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You know you're like my favorite person ever, right? I saved the icon, and totally am going to use it for a special occasion. Just you wait. XD XD XD
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
You use rocks to start a fire? I use matches.
*rimshot*
I really liked your analogy. :)
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I use rocks because I tend to go backpacking and sometimes forget matches and/or Swedish fire steel... Heheheh, thanks about the analogy.
Happy New Year and well done!
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The ending confused me a bit, though. What trap had Iwa fallen into? I think I was probably too tired to read this... lol
There were quite a few typos but oh well. Live and let live.
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Iwa thing: “I hope Iwa goes back on their word. Otherwise all of the traps I set up on the field and the fresh wave of troops waiting them would have been for nothing.” -Kakashi
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