(In this exercise we were asked: write a scene in which 2 characters are quarrelling about the setting. One wants to stay and the other wants to leave
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Well I think you definitely succeeded in filling the brief there Lucy! I couldn't stop reading that... I'm desperate to know where it goes now!! O_o The setting was brilliant- I could see it, smell it, taste it. You are very skilled lady!
Yes, please -- I want to know where this goes!! The tone implies that the narrator is recalling this in some way, so there has to be more to the story! :D
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The one about the young teens in the creepy house... I made quite a few further notes about that story, so there might well be more of it.
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<3!
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OK, I started a while ago, but it was really helpful. So far, I've posted my first marked piece, followed by some of the earlier exercises.
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