Fic: Broken

Jan 02, 2009 15:52

Title: Broken.
Rating: G I suppose.
Characters/Pairing: Ianto, brief Tosh. Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: It's set post End of Days, so spoilers for that.
Disclaimer: Don't own it blah blah.
Note: Written for Day Two at redismycolour. I don't usually like my Ianto this angsty, but this is the way it came out. I'm really not pleased with it, but I want to just post it and get ( Read more... )

redismycolour, fic, jack & jones

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starlight30 January 2 2009, 22:08:04 UTC
Beautiful! I love your Ianto - he's thoughtful and emotional, but strong. =) ♥

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lucy_locket January 2 2009, 23:11:46 UTC
Aww, I'm so glad you think so. Thanks babe.

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cherry_soup888 January 2 2009, 23:53:58 UTC
Awww babe that was gorgeous!

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lucy_locket January 3 2009, 00:29:34 UTC
Thank you darling! <3

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blue_fjords January 3 2009, 06:09:47 UTC
Nice job of evoking the setting and atmosphere. Makes me yearn for the sea!

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lucy_locket January 3 2009, 16:37:42 UTC
Thank you so much! I live by the sea, and I love the beach in winter. So I'm glad you think I have the atmosphere right.

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_squaredance January 3 2009, 16:03:32 UTC
Yes, yes, yes! I enjoy Jack and the tide metaphor. It just fits him so perfectly. As does the image of Ianto on shore waiting for his return.

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lucy_locket January 3 2009, 16:38:31 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad those things came across.

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bardlover6 January 4 2009, 01:55:23 UTC
Lovely.

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lucy_locket January 4 2009, 21:43:04 UTC
Thank you!

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