Of the Essence

[luciferhisaki]

Title: Of the Essence
Author: Meri (mercy_slays/luciferhisaki
Rating: PG-13 (I guess? There’s some curse words. I hate rating my fics that aren’t smut.)
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Gen. Spock/Uhura references. Possible Kirk+Spock implications Doubt it.
Summary: In which we find out how Kirk knew where Pike’s location is in the Narada. And part of the aftermath of how he

Comments

[dreadnought]

This was great!! I liked how you integrated the movie in with scenes and themes of your own. :)

One thing:

It’s enough to break the Vulcan’s revelry.

I think you mean reverie...revelry is "noisy partying or merrymaking". :)

[mercy_slays]

Fixed! Bloody Microsoft Word and spell check. *facepalm*

Thanks for the review! I was a bit scared it wouldn't cohere easily with the movie but after writing that first scene... Couldn't resist writing other ones. ^^;

[schweinsty]

Oh, I liked this - especially the parts that weren't really covered in the movie :). Interesting take on the start of Kirk and Spock's friendship. Thanks for sharing!

[mercy_slays]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[anonymous]

Well, we knew all along how Kirk knew where Pike is.
Spock found out during his mind-meld with the Romulan, he said so, and obviously filled Jim in...

but very good story nevertheless ^-^

[kerravonsen]

I like this idea! But then I like mind-meldy stuff.

Kirk’s impatience wanes;
I think you mean "patience".

There are a few other typos, but I can't remember where.

[vinylsigns]

Eeee, this was absolutely fabulous! I like that Spock and Kirk were so in sync in the field, but still not quite comfortable with each other one-on-one, though the potential is right there. Bones was A+, of course, and I just *flails a little* Everything about this I love :D Wonderful!