Chapter 06 - Red

Jul 31, 2006 23:48

Title.: Corvus et Serenus ( Read more... )

red, story, lucius, severus

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severus79 August 2 2006, 11:24:34 UTC
Good very good, just give me some time to comment fully I'm really busy lately. Keep it up!

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luciamalfoy August 3 2006, 00:03:51 UTC
That's alright, dear. The heat is killing. I hope your do fine.
When I get the time I will watch a bit through your recent journals, too. Just had some probs again with my net. :(

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milomymilo August 2 2006, 23:25:10 UTC
'Severus watched him a few more seconds, but instead of answering just kissed him clumsily on his throat, whispering.:"More!"'

My god!! This chapter is so amazingly HOT! Thank you, thank you for making them get down to business while Severus is still so young. Yum! When Severus fell asleep at Lucius' shoulder I was so afraid that you were going to leave it at that. Imagine my thrill when I realized the best was yet to come ;)

Love your detailed description of the Malfoy Manor, truly beautiful.

Lucia, how can you not be happy about this chapter?? If you ask me, it's the best one yet...

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`o´ luciamalfoy August 3 2006, 00:15:22 UTC
I told you dear, this chapter went so far... I thought of never writing more than 2000 words per 'Colour'. But there needed to be more than just seducing Severus Snape in one go. Even if he is still a child, he is not a 'blondy'.

I'm mean, right? My beta was shocked first, too. She thought I would leave it there but said it would be perfect. Like a cookie to the reader, when they shag later. :D I love Dom/older Luce and ickle/sub Severus. Though he is the keeper and ruler of Luce's heart in this Story...

I love to describe the Malfoy Manor. And now that you told me, you like it. I feel better and perhaps even a bit proud. ;)

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