Comments | lozenger8: Waste Not, Want Not

lozenger8

Waste Not, Want Not

Sep 09, 2007 22:55

Title: Waste Not, Want Not
Fandom: Life on Mars
Rating: PG
Word Count: 360 words.
Notes: Gen for jantalaimon, on her birthday. Which is today, in my timezone. ♥

( Waste not, Want not )

rated pg, writing, tiny, life on mars, twisted

Comments 39

talkingtothesky September 10 2007, 06:56:40 UTC

Muhahahaha! I love this 'cos it's so evil! It's easy to guess who it is from the beginning but once you know it's horrible! Chris, I will never see you in quite the same light again...

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 08:31:16 UTC

It's all m31andy, darthfi and jantalaimon's fault.

m31andy September 10 2007, 15:17:33 UTC

*cough*

I believe, on that logic, it is therefore *your* fault.

(And I'm sure we've had this conversation before!!!)

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 15:22:08 UTC

All I ever did was write a harmless story where Sam was a serial killer. That's all. The rest is yours.

meli_64 September 10 2007, 07:02:58 UTC

Oh my G-D! You did not write an evil!Chris story! Oh my f-ing G-d! You did! My mouth is wide.

Loz, you have literally pawned me. I'm not sure what that entirely means, but you have. I seriously...Oh my. Dude, you fucking rule! This was brilliant and I am in shock unable to come up with words...Mostly because I would never in a million years think of evil!Chris. You're amazing.

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 08:32:01 UTC

I think you mean 'pwned'.

Thanks Meli. Evil!Chris isn't my creation, but he's fun to play with.

innogen September 10 2007, 07:11:27 UTC

This is so so DARK. Ouch. ::Applause!::

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 08:32:24 UTC

Thanks >:D

neuralclone September 10 2007, 08:04:47 UTC

Ooh... Evil Chris and Evil Annie! Evil, evil Loz!

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 08:32:50 UTC

BWAAAHAHAHAHHAA!

;)

dorsetgirl September 10 2007, 08:10:36 UTC

Good God, woman, you've gone very dark lately. I'm starting to seriously hesitate before clicking on your stuff.

I can't honestly say I like the story, but I do like the way you've done it. It's very clever.

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 08:14:41 UTC

I think several people will tell you with glee that I've always been very dark :D

I like to mix it up. My next piece is going to be more akin to fluff, though. I've decided.

Thanks. ♥

dorsetgirl September 10 2007, 09:34:10 UTC

I've decided. You obviously have better control of your bunnies than I do.

Mine just go where they want and I try to follow. "Signals" started off simply with an image in my mind (mmmm) of Sam posing on the diving board. I had no idea I was going to end up with my first attempt at writing penetration.

Someone suggested that following that story, I should write Gene's first time, but I don't see any point, because anyone who wants to know can, and should, read Inverse. I can't better that!

lozenger8 September 10 2007, 09:43:06 UTC

Oh no, don't think like that! Just think of the all of the brilliant stories that would never have been written if the writers had thought, 'but it's been done!' It doesn't matter if it's been done before - what matters is your interpretation, your spin.

Writing 'Inverse' was the second most difficult thing I've done in my entire life. The first was writing the Sam/Gene/Annie threesome in 'Goodnight, Sweetheart'. My sexual paranoia extends far. (I almost always want to write dialogue, dialogue, dialogue and end with 'and then they done sex'.)

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