The End is Nigh (Ngk 9)

[foxxfire5]

Well, the end of my fic anyway. Here it is the last bit of my first Good Omens fanfic, "Angelic Lies, Demonic Truths."

For a really crappy summary as well as the first part of this fic, go here: http://community.livejournal.com/lower_tadfield/788452.html#cutid1
The second part is here:
  http://community.livejournal.com/lower_tadfield/788994.html?

Comments

[caedesdeo]

So much love for this!

I love the character of Raphael, and the footnotes! Oh, the footnotes were brilliant.

You know better. Hee!

[foxxfire5]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

And the fact that you like Raphael makes me happy. :D

And of course, 'I'm not angry, I'm disappointed.' xDD

Thanks for commenting! <3 <3

[bakaknight]

Awwww....
You mean it's OVER?
-sniffles-
Wonderful.
And now, of course, we want more from you.

[foxxfire5]

I'm glad you liked it--and while this story is over, you will see more from me. Summonings will be next. And the GO exchange, though noone will know it's me until later. xD

But yea, I'll write more, thanks for the comment! <3

[hsavinien]

Very, very good. 7th in the third set of footprints there was a Fell that should be Felled.

^___^ *cheers* Very good characterization and internal character development. I'm so glad you did this.

[foxxfire5]

I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for the correction. *fixes it*

Thanks very much for the comments along the way, and I'm so glad you read it! <3

[todd_fan]

WOO, oh man I loved all of this, and even wibbled in places.

TED!!! *giggles insanely*

'Whereupon it tripled in size and developed a hilt, though it was still distinctively scalpel-like.' - Lawl a GIANT flaming scalpel. Class

Loved it from start to finish, beuatiful, beautiful fic!

[foxxfire5]

Really, you wibbled? That's good--unless you were nearly crying at how horrid it was. xD

I put that description of Ted/Thamuz' regular form just for you. ^_~

That's what that big ole sword looking scalpel thing on the da sketch pic is. I drew the flaming scalpel and the scalpel-sword. And yes. No one can say Raphael isn't classy. xDD

I'm so glad you liked it!! *hug*

[thesometimes]

Bah! I saw this pop up and grimaced, knowing I would feel compelled to go back and start from the beginning, because honestly, you can't start a story from the end. TOTALLY worth it, as I aww'ed and cringed and perched on the edge of my chair through the whole thing. Going to comment you to death here, hope you don't mind.

I am totally enamored with Aziraphale and Crowley's back-and-forth dialogue, LOVE IT. Their friendship/comraderie/winkwinknudgenudge is absolutely adorable in this. And Raphael. Oh Raphael. <3 *ahem* Love how Crowley felt compelled to pick on his naming of the flaming 'sword', even in the middle of possible danger.

LOVED the whole dam--bless--er, bloody thing. ;D

[foxxfire5]

Lol, sorry for the length but I'm glad you thought it was worth it! The fact that you cringed and awwed and were on the edge of your seat is a big compliment! Thanks a lot. ^_^ (And I never mind comments. Unless they're insults that involve my mother. xD)

Oo, glad you liked the Crow-Azi dialogue. It was one of the most fun things to write. And I'm glad their relationship--however one interprets it, friends or more--seemed cute. ^^

Oh I'm so glad you liked Raphael! (I luv him, too. ^^) I didn't want him to be the 'villain' in the story, even if he's juxtaposed against Cro and Azi for a while.

Yea, Crow has to take time out to snark. >xD

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked!! And thanks for the super nice comments. <3 <3