The End is Nigh (Ngk 9)

[foxxfire5]

Well, the end of my fic anyway. Here it is the last bit of my first Good Omens fanfic, "Angelic Lies, Demonic Truths."

For a really crappy summary as well as the first part of this fic, go here: http://community.livejournal.com/lower_tadfield/788452.html#cutid1
The second part is here:
  http://community.livejournal.com/lower_tadfield/788994.html?

Comments

[rare_fandom]

First, I must mention that your writing has noticeably improved since the first chapter. Not that is was horrible to be begin with (far from it), but as the chapters move along the sentence structure/style improves, and the dialogue becomes more amusing and more natural.

Second, your Crowley/Aziraphale dialogue is the cutest thing ever. I love how they sound like old friends, and the way it’s so obvious they care about each other even when they’re being snarky (Crowley) or reproving (Azi).

Third, I heart your Raphael. He’s so adorkable. The chocolate stash in specific had me giggling for quite some time. And asking Crowley to look out for him if he Fell was just…wow. In good ways.

Wonderful job on this all around. Looking forward to seeing more from you.

[foxxfire5]

Thank you--looking back, I think the writing improved mostly because I got more confident, got more of a 'feel' for things. This was my first Go fic, and I'm glad you think it improved over time rather than the opposite. ^^

Thanks for the dialogue comment! Writing the banter between Crow and Azi was possibly my favorite thing to write. (Though I admit, Raphael was extremely amusing to write as well. xD) And I'm glad the fact that they care came across in the dialogue--especially on Crowley's part. ^_^

Aw, yay, I'm glad you like Raphael! Adorkable. *cracks up* That's a very good way to describe him. (May i ask what in particular you liked about Raph asking Crowley to look after him if he Fell? Sorry to ask ^^;, I'm just curious--I wondered what reader's responses would be to that.)

Thanks so much for your comment. And you will see more from me, for sure. ^_^

[wolf]

Ooh, my, it took me so long to comment on this! My apologies; things have been busy lately (definitely, totally swamped). D: ~ In any case, I loved reading this story so much! Compassionate/Friendly?/Worried!Crowley always cheers me up, and I really enjoyed the bit with Raphael going nuts with the miracles in the end. Absolutely perfect! Thank you for sharing with us all!! :D ♥ (PS - Love the art!)

[foxxfire5]

Hey no problem--it took me forever to reply to your late reply so we're totally even. ^_~

I'm glad you liked it. And Raphael. He has little restraint. xD I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the comment about the art-drawings like my hobby--which means I don't think I'm very good at it but I like doing it anyway. lol. <3

Thanks for the commentz, mah dear!

[yume_li]

I like this version of Raphael better than SPN version.