*nervous angst*

[runic_binary]

Ooookay. Nervous, veryvery nervous. *takes deep breaths* Right then. Okay, I said I was going to write more, so I did. About ten pages more. My first (relatively) long fanfiction. Yikes.

It's sort of a sequel to Christmas Shopping and Revelation, in which Crowley goes to have his centennial evaluation. He also runs into an old friend, and bad things

Comments

[kindigo]

Why are you nervous? This is simply fantastic. It really is. *claps enthusiastically*

If I had to say that something was off- and I was hard-pressed to find something to criticize- I would say that at the end Hastur vanishes a tad too quickly for someonething so...er...emotional. But it could also be explained away. *shrugs*

Again, marvellous job, and thanks for sharing the loverly ♥ ♥

[runic_binary]

Eeee, thanks ^^

Yeah, I was sort of worried about that...I'm not used to writing longer stories like this. I'll have to work on that.

[gantar]

I agree with kindigo, this is really great. You have no reason at all to feel nervous :)

As for Hastur, hm... well, I also think he could have vanished a bit later, though not because he was emotional, but rather because of how much he wanted to take his revenge. You know, if he followed Crowley after he left hell, then I think it should take Crowley and Aziraphale more to make him give the revenge up.

[runic_binary]

Thanks! ^^

And who says he's given the revenge up? *shifty eyes*

[sailorptah]

Love it. Full of great lines. ("This particular bit of Too Late was of the 2.14 variety." XD)

And there's going to be more? Can't wait.

[runic_binary]

Oh, there's always going to be more XD I don't think I'm going to write more of this particular story for a while...but I will.

[daughtersofisis]

!!!!!!!!

JOY.

This was lovely. Hastur must be very much off his nut, dressing up in demon-kitsch like that. ^_^ I loved Mister Random Man in the last scene. And Crowley needs a cup of tea . . . yes. JOY.

(Am I the only one who finds Hastur in a lorry to be vastly amusing?)

[runic_binary]

Hee, glad you liked ^^

Well, really the whole idea is that Hastur is off his nut XD And you know, I think the dude in the last scene shall henceforth be known as Mister Random Man. Also, tea is the solution to all problems.

(I certainly hope not.)

[daughtersofisis]

It's a funny thing, but adding Mister to anything automatically makes it funny. At least that's my experience. Search me why. Tea is indeed the solution to all problems, including genocide.

[runic_binary]

*experiments with this* Mister Banana... Mister Toothpaste... Mister Waffle Iron...by god, you're right.

Come on, you /know/ that if the Interhambwe had sat down and had a nice cup of tea, someone would have piped up and gone "You know, maybe the Tutsis don't really /need/ to be brutally slain..."

[shadowvalkyrie]

Good fun! You really shouldn't worry so much!
Crowley's scenes in hell were just perfect and his coming back to earth was really nicely sarcastic.

I especially loved: "Fortunately for Crowley, in Hell, it is acceptable and in some cases even encouraged to settle disputes by lunging claws-and-fangs first at an opponent in the middle of an active hallway in an office building." *lol* And Crowley's making puppy-eyes at Martha... So adorable! Who could have resisted?

For the constructive criticism: I hope you don't mind me saying so, but at times your Crowley/Aziraphale interactions get a tiny bit too sugary... But your story is really lovely anyway and has many very memorable lines, so don't listen to me!

[runic_binary]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it ^^

I had way too much fun writing those parts :D

You know, a friend of mine told me that, and I don't know why I didn't listen to her. Nnrgh. Thanks.