Comments | lower_tadfield: *nervous angst*

runic_binary in lower_tadfield

nervous angst

Nov 22, 2006 03:53

Ooookay. Nervous, veryvery nervous. *takes deep breaths* Right then. Okay, I said I was going to write more, so I did. About ten pages more. My first (relatively) long fanfiction. Yikes.

It's sort of a sequel to Christmas Shopping and Revelation, in which Crowley goes to have his centennial evaluation. He also runs into an old friend, and bad things ( Read more... )

original character, slash, fic, aziraphale, hastur, crowley, aziraphale/crowley, other demons

Comments 18

bentley November 24 2006, 05:52:14 UTC

Hey, that was great! Best footnotes I've seen in a while, and everyone needs a but of fluffy A/C every so often. Your premise was quite good, and I loved some of your depictions of hell, not in the least Crowley's shameless pleading to get back Upstairs. A little bit "wtf" regarding Hastur/Ligur, but otherwise A++.

runic_binary November 24 2006, 06:12:24 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it :D

About the Hastur/Ligur thing, it was actually not meant to be that way, and I know this is going to seem weird, but...they've probably known each other since the beginning of time too, right? Well, I figure that if you're best friends (and I always sort of thought they were) for /that long/, then you end up having sort of a "love" type of friendship, if that makes any sense, which it may not considering that I have not slept for a while. But anyway, I thought that, being hardcore demons, they probaly never /said/ that they were friends, which caused massive amounts of angst for Hastur. That was my reasoning, anyway.

rasetsunyo November 25 2006, 13:12:24 UTC

Eeeeee pleading!Crowley! So cute hahaha. Oh man this was a great mix of humour and (Hastur) angst, please to be writing more?

The only nit-pick -- and I'm not a canon-bitch, so it's completely fine if you want to take a bit of artistic license -- is I got the impression that Adam brought Ligur back after the failed Apocalypse. The black patch that was Ligur had vanished from Crowley's apartment, and Crowley "wondered about Adam's judgement" about that. But like I said, this fic is very well done and I enjoyed it very much, and seeing a slightly different side to Hastur was great. So thank you for sharing! :D

runic_binary November 25 2006, 18:47:41 UTC

Thanks ^^ I will be writing more, when I get the time.

You know, I actually thought that too...but I was kind of going for something different here. Heck, I could write an entire essay on what I do think is canon and how I mess with it for my own illicit purposes if I thought anyone would read it XD