Friday, January 24th, 1992
Dean made it through the week by avoiding the hallway near the auditorium, by taking the long way around for his geography class, and by keeping his eyes open the whole time. He hardly dared blink. His eyes were as dry as dusty bones, but at least his homework had been handed in, and he wasn’t limping anymore. He still
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OK, I will be more coherent later. But in short, you've a deft hand with some of the small touches that makes a good story so enjoyable.
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This is absolutely wrenching. Tremendous work. Gahh, now I gotta go read something funny, because I SERIOUSLY am tearing up. Dean, baby boy.
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Thank you for your lovely post. My head is quite swelled now.
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This is so good, and Dean is so amazing and his daddy just knows something is wrong and omg...
The whole black out and the lunch money and John figuring something out, and at the same time it being his birthday and it just is no symbolic meaning or anything like that, just that it is. Which did so much to tell about how much Dean's birthday was to the family.
This is such a realistic view of Dean, and I love that, I love how passivly he inists that sam find out, as well as not realizing it. He's so broken, and the NEST.
That really made me cry, the nest with dean in it.
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I hope the nest did him some good. I'm sorry I made you cry...but it's satisfying in a way, too, to reach a reader like that. Thank you.
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Thanks for posting
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And about Sam's anger, yes! And a lot of victims feel that way too- finally at a point where I can do something except there's nothing left to do to the perpetrator
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